There’s three duplicate paragraphs in the middle of the chapter

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Bit of an odd perspective jump from last chapter

It appears to be written with an AI app so that’ pry whys

Chat gpt*

Chat got promp half way through the chapter. Might want to fix lol

Still appears to repeat. Will check again later ,aybe it takes a bit

Half this chapter is legit word for word a copy paste, exact same content posted twice

Two paragraphs are just repeated here, moves the story forward but not in an appreciable way. 4/10 not worth privileged status

Good chapter, actual story, actual progress.

One page of story, nine pages of this is what the enemies card is. Filler, skip this chapter.

Ah chapter ten of filler, not even remotely related to Wyatt’ perspective and about people not directly involved in the actual main plot of the ark. Waste of stones.

Like 9chapters of filler material ark is feeling like a cheap house, all saw dust and bs

Whose’s in Paris?

My guy post less at the back of the chapter, like one big author note every 5 is fine

Three weed smoking girl friends eh?

Really enjoying it so far, wish there was a lot more to read, I knocked out the released content in like 30minutes. It’s a fun read with a lot of good points and potential to develop lope

@Legion can I commission o a hard cover book set of your story? Like I don’ even care if it’s a few hundred

I consider anything i would put at 4-5 stars a book i would be willing to buy a physical copy of. this one Needs a bit more content With stable power creep and reasonAble expansion before id move it to that teir.

Br….please let me edit you early chapters, they hard difficult to read to native english folks.