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AYE LIEK REEDIN BOWT VIDYA GAMES AN KARATE WIZARDS!
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Othy5dReplied to Idczhen- Othy6dPosted
The story seemed cool all the way up to the point i learned the MC was some kind of penal soldier.(part way through chapter 1) the author took the lowest hanging fruit and likely doesn’t know everybody hates an MC with no agency. The only other rule that is as high on the list is to never take things away from the from the MC. There are exceptions but I have serious doubts that someone on webnovel is good enough to break the basic rules and get away with it.
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- Othy5mthCommented[The character "Kaizen" of the human race has been successfully created. In Rise Online you are free to evolve as you choose. Your attributes and Class will be determined as you play].
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Rizzer Park.
Even though it was difficult, all the Park's believed that Rhyzer would wake up one day, and as they had made a lot of money in the last year, they chose to keep him plugged into the machines. - Othy6mthCommentedCh 235 Florida Man Attacked and Killed Home Intruder Using Giant Octopus.
- Othy8mthCommentedthen a Stone Sphere appear in front of me. it glow in a soft blue light.
- Othy8mthCommented
This isn’t going to just be a fanfic with the serial number filed off is it?
The guild Jayce had joined was called Avalanche, a mid-sized guild on the Asian continent. Its leader's true name was unknown, but he went by the alias Cloud, wielding a colossal greatsword that spanned the length of his towering frame. - Othy8mthCommentedWhen they got there, they realized that the murderer was already dead.
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This story will be either great or terrible with no space between. Let’s find out which.
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Replying to my own post after seeing this again. I have seriously seen individual fights that don’t necessarily drive much forward take up to 15 chapters in other stories and an individual large scale fight take an entire story arc when 1-2 days of time where it could easily be cut down to 2-3 chapters without losing anything important and a 4th would be considered bloated.
Ch 209 Annihilation - Othy10mthCommented
F O U R S K I L L S O U R S K I L L S
Mo Xiu - Othy10mthCommented"I'm f*cking invincible!" Zhang Xuan shouted excitedly. However, the soundproofing of their room wasn't very good. This attracted his parents downstairs.