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Review Detail of Androfox in Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World

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Androfox
AndrofoxLv131yrAndrofox

Quick advice, in the synopsis you mention guns, I suggest you remove them since they reduce an already low immersion(since its a seclusion type novel). Im not saying my opinion im stating facts: people that read fantasy novels want to be immersed in a fantasy world and by putting things that dont match the world(guns), it usually isnt viewed well by the reader, even if it is comedy. There is a reason why modern-world cultivation novels sell less than a cultivation novel based on a proper ancient cultivation world. Hope this might help.

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Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World

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Othy
OthyLv15Othy

Someone hasn’t read very far.

lazyvampiredemonas:To those wondering, guns or any futuristic items are not present in the story. As SPOILER His powers seem to work out of the idea of selling only that specific worlds products cheaply.
Spabsta
SpabstaLv14Spabsta

I agree. If modern things are added like guns then consider your story trash. Fantasy world for a reason

lazyvampiredemonas
lazyvampiredemonasLv4lazyvampiredemonas

To those wondering, guns or any futuristic items are not present in the story. As SPOILER His powers seem to work out of the idea of selling only that specific worlds products cheaply.

zxjan08
zxjan08Lv14zxjan08

Bro missed the whole point of the story, it’s not traditional or meant to be at all

Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4Shadow_Gamer1

it's about a Florida man in the wild,get with the program

Primordial_Two
Primordial_TwoLv4Primordial_Two

a wild Florida Man is more dangerous

Shadow_Gamer1:it's about a Florida man in the wild,get with the program
NexIzich
NexIzichLv15NexIzich

Dam, are you the reason I can't find too many fantasy novels with guns in them? Everyone has their own opinion, yours included. While there are 3 people here voting against guns, there are just as many for guns. Correlation does not necessarily equal causation.

Redzeth
RedzethLv13Redzeth

I mean, sure guns are boring but what about futuristic weaponry? Since he comes from an apocolyptic future it could work great. (Also remembering the infinite ammo rocket launcher from black tech internet cafe had me folded double)

William_Claw
William_ClawLv15William_Claw

I don't think this is helpful feedback. this isnt a standard cultivation novel. there are thousands of cultivation novels with swords sabers and spears. It is a welcome change for someone to write something new. And we are immersed in FLORIDA man taking his culture to a cultivation world. it completely fits the story to bring something like that out, even if it is just to shoot at furniture. he should make a factory for guns and train some plants and unicorns on how to shoot at squirrels and accidentally break his neighbors window..... that is exactly the kind of ridiculousness I expect to see in this particular take of a cultivation world.

SleepyOakTree
SleepyOakTreeLv14SleepyOakTree

very few hold this person's opinion, add guns, don't add guns, it doesn't matter, it's your story.

O5_1
O5_1Lv3O5_1

personally I don't agree with your opinion, guns are cool, especially in fantasy.

Skosem
SkosemLv15Skosem

facts no disrespect

system_evolver
system_evolverLv14system_evolver

His system is alien technology... so I think guns are perfectly fine.

GreatDaoOfKarma
GreatDaoOfKarmaLv1GreatDaoOfKarma

trashy young master : "YOU ARE COURTING DEATH!!!" Florida man *Shoots* : "Headshot!"

GreatDaoOfKarma
GreatDaoOfKarmaLv1GreatDaoOfKarma

that is pretty funny

GreatDaoOfKarma:trashy young master : "YOU ARE COURTING DEATH!!!" Florida man *Shoots* : "Headshot!"
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Quinnlin_Raber
Quinnlin_RaberLv15Quinnlin_Raber

Not your story, let him tell it the way he wants to guys, if he listens to you guys then that's his choice. sometimes the story is more than the money, but who knows.

DamnPlotArmor
DamnPlotArmorAuthorDamnPlotArmor

The comment was made 4 months ago. This novel is roughly 4-5 months old. Of course, he can't read chapter 100 or later. XD

Othy:Someone hasn’t read very far.
Othy
OthyLv15Othy

I suppose that’s fair. I didn’t look at the time stam on that post.p

DamnPlotArmor:The comment was made 4 months ago. This novel is roughly 4-5 months old. Of course, he can't read chapter 100 or later. XD
Loli_Platoon79
Loli_Platoon79Lv4Loli_Platoon79

You know what breaks immersion? A Florida man with no guns.

puremichigan
puremichiganLv15puremichigan

Florida men all have guns, or else this will happen to you. He had alien technology on Earth that turned into a nuclear wasteland in the first chapter, so having guns makes sense.