The writing and story are great. I really enjoy the mc and his developments. I think this novel needs more love and the author needs more appreciation. The first couple chapter have some grammar errors by the author hired a editor to smooth it out and is also taking English classes. I appreciate the author trying his best to improve the quality of his writing. Most authors never take advice or try to improve they’re novels and just delete comments about it. So Mr. Author of ya read this just know that you’re doing a great job and I hope to see more of your great work. 👍👍👍

This is really good and has a lot of potential. Keep it going.

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What happened to the farm idea?

I enjoy the story so far but could you please put parentheses for when he is talking. It'll make easier to read. Thank you for the novel.

Cant believe he forgot Jay. 😭

Not gonna lie this kinda reminds me of Dnd.😭

I thinks it's supposed to be "We all know your not my opponent"

Good luck

Good luck.

Thanks for the chapter.

Quotes needed.

Good stuff thanks for the great work.

Wheres the art?

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

No problem just take care of yourself before us.

Keep writing please this is great. Man I'll throw comments out if that'll keep up the great work.

I just started reading it and I honestly really enjoy it. I think the drama is a lot but it really hits my feelings. Dont listen to the super negative reviews and keep on writing this. I'll gladly spend coins on it.

down not done