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VisionaryWorld13dReplied to Omega989*Spoiler* They both work jointly lol simple, hiruzen likes the work and Minato can focus more on outside relations and becoming stronger
As we approached the Hokage's office, the guards recognized us and allowed us entry without hesitation. Inside, we found Lord Third, Hiruzen Sarutobi, immersed in paperwork. Despite his age, he radiated a calm authority, his wisdom and experience evident in his every move.- VisionaryWorld13dPosted
Y’all might be from the previous title, Reborn as a False Uchiha.. even though I crossed 120k words I decided to give yall a better story and with my new plotting style. Check out the other books on my profile please and whichever gets the most stones weekly will get more focus on extra chapters. This is a story of Naruto and his twin brother Ryusei. It starts at the chunin exams and just shows a sort of slice of life mixed in with action in a parallel timeline where minato and kushina are still alive,R** doesn’t die, Uchiha clan doesn’t die, orochimaru dies, the reanimated hokages become punching bags, great ape uses ki and chakra to deflect tailed beast bombs, everybody slowly becomes stronger than canon counterparts.. different relationships will strengthen and weaken blah blah blah this story shall be new and better. Join the discord https://discord.gg/t2z7MDjt
- VisionaryWorld16dCommentedCh 1 1. Morning of The Chunin Exams
- VisionaryWorld17dReplied to Omega989
I’ll try and use what you said in the next chap, dropping in an hour
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Nah I’m just getting back into releasing please bare with me for another 5 - 10 chaps I haven’t been editing before posting how I used to
This paragraph has been deleted. - VisionaryWorld21dCommentedHe is fully sure that that battle junkie did it because he wanted to fight all those Akatsuki members on his own.
- VisionaryWorld25dReplied to DaoistsGHarm
Well than let’s go to the depths of evil why not ?
Futoria, tears streaming down her face, turned to Armon. "Armon, please understand," she pleaded, her voice breaking. "We will resurrect humanity the first chance we get. Please, rest in the heavens with our families." - VisionaryWorld26dReplied to WvttzThat's right. The importance of the village in Obito's heart was no match for the first two. Just look at what Obito did after he turned black. He hated Kakashi but refused to kill him several times. However, he was ruthless when dealing with Konoha. He released Bijuu and Peien. He was simply heartless.
- VisionaryWorld27dReplied to Pikachu_1233
Xenoverse weren’t canon
"If you can still use your prediction ability, you should know what I mean." - VisionaryWorld27dReplied to Uchiha_Itachi_8718
Did you not read the chap lol
"Ding! Congratulations host on selecting a choice, the reward has been delivered! Next, please protect Planet Vegeta. Once Planet Vegeta is destroyed, the host will be erased immediately." - VisionaryWorld27dReplied to Steve_0626
It makes sense, the chars know him as links however narration uses his original name. It’s coo fr just give it a couple chapters and you won’t notice it
"Go away! My only target is him!" Lin Chen pointed at King Vegeta and said, "Could it be that you dare not accept the challenge?" - VisionaryWorld28dReplied to Tsubasa93
lol slave to the system slave to the plot what’s the difference
[Mission failure: The system immediately self-destructed on the spot (Don't ask, asking is enough. Want to die! ] - VisionaryWorld1mthReplied to chaz_mars
- VisionaryWorld1mthReplied to LonelyLearner19
Helll naw
4. Harem start - VisionaryWorld1mthReplied to Kido_TO
She’s older in this fanfic, everyone’s life span is like 3-5x longer, it’s a much vaster world
Sarada was the first to speak, "Zuno Shisora is currently at his residence. The last time he was checked he is around Genin level. Father, what would like us to do?" - VisionaryWorld1mthReplied to J_i_n_g_L_i_u
Asian rock Johnson
At the age of seventeen, the boy's appearance still reveals a hint of youthful innocence. - VisionaryWorld1mthReplied to Henzy_5477
Thanks for the review! There’s a couple groups of chaps that I was just writing to meet word goals, I’m planning on a rework while continuing the story. As far as power systems nd allat, everything is chakra or just energy in general. Arguably it doesn’t feel right writing chars for example gray saying Ice Jutsu” when it’s ice make.. nd the inserts are bound to be random however I agree I should have done more effort in the writing, I’ve skilled over multiple scenes and key points without showing correlation in the chapters to come
- VisionaryWorld1mthReplied to THE_LIVING_PARADOXCh 3 3. Killing Peeping Toms And Making Babies
- VisionaryWorld1mthReplied to DaoistsGHarm
First pick as to which AOT character(s) are featured in this?
As he watched over his unhatched offspring, Titus felt a sense of pride swell within him—a pride born from the knowledge that he was no longer bound by the constraints of his former life. He was no longer just Titus, the disgraced soldier. He was the Arachnid Titan, a force to be reckoned with, a harbinger of doom and destruction. - VisionaryWorld1mthReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 1 1. Arachnid Titan's Awakening