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yup. Insure did. thanks.
thank you very much. I just wanted to have an idea if they would keep privileged, or would eventually be released out of it... I'm capable of waiting a couple months, understanding it's the author's right to get some revenue out of their hard work, but I had to know if I had to wait or just forget it (I mean, stuff always going to be behind the paywall, in which case I'd have to wait for completion before making plans of buying).
honestly, sometimes it's better to leave things like that unspecified... the autor could've said something like: "he made just enough to pay his expanses "
there's one major recurring mistake that brakes comprehension - and thus, Immersion - that the author need to be made aware of: planetary systems are not galaxies. other than that the narrative is involving. I read all today. hope it goes forward, and for the author to improve his writing (specifically the "galaxy" thing)
a pity, because his narrative is really good
the author doesn't know what a galaxy is... he mistakes it for planetary systems.
GALAXY: a system of millions or billions of stars, together with gas and dust, held together by gravitational attraction. STAR SYSTEM: or stellar system is a small number of stars that orbit each other,[1] bound by gravitational attraction. A large group of stars bound by gravitation is generally called a star cluster or galaxy, although, broadly speaking, they are also star systems. Star systems are not to be confused with planetary systems, which include planets and similar bodies (such as comets). PLANETARY SYSTEM: is a set of gravitationally bound non-stellar objects in or out of orbit around a star or star system. Generally speaking, systems with one or more planets constitute a planetary system, although such systems may also consist of bodies such as dwarf planets, asteroids, natural satellites, meteoroids, comets, planetesimals[1][2] and circumstellar disks. The Sun together with the planetary system revolving around it, including Earth, forms the Solar System.[3][4] The term exoplanetary system is sometimes used in reference to other planetary systems.
again at it... "star system" instead of "galaxy", dear author
the autor seems to be missing the concept of "star system" in his vocabulary and referring to it wrongly as galaxy. I had the suspicion at first, but it got clear when he referred to the solar system as a galaxy in a previous chapter, and needs the term milkyway to refer to what it's part of... I'm just swapping "galaxy" for "star system" in my mind every time he says it, and everything makes more sense
I batch unlocked all the chapters... I have to say, I feel robbed.... from the No Chapter all the way to 73 were all repeats of chapter 51... that's a lot of coins for a teacher on a 3rd world country
dear dear author... that was... disturbing... I think I just acquired a new unreasonable fobia
dear dear author... that was... disturbing... I think I just acquired a new unreasonable fobia
yeah... getting a reviewer might be a good idea. frond is a type of fern right? a few chapters back it was used like a place preposition... got me really lost .... loved the 4th wall breaks and pacing though...