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Rivenspree25dReplied to ZRain_raionThomas Andre, The Scavenger Guild Guildmaster, Nation-level hunter.
Hmm, this shirt looks fun, it's a super ugly buttoned Hawaiian shirt. It would be funny if I show up to a super important event with that on, unbuttoned leaving my bare chest open.- Rivenspree26dCommented
Ruler's Authority doesn't consume any mana, so using it for mana manipulation is a bit wrong
The first thing I did was try out Ruler's Authority with the toy's in the crib and when trying it out the toys started to give out a purple outline and started floating slightly, it was unexpectedly easy due to my instincts guiding me on how to do it, and while letting it float about I was perfecting my mana control which will be quite useful. - Rivenspree1mthReplied to Tigrallef
- Rivenspree1mthCommentedHe lunged at me without thinking. Jake and another officer opened fire. The bullet hit him right on the shoulder and his head, killing him immediately. The blood splatter rolled down my face as I looked at the guy emotionlessly.
- Rivenspree1mthReplied to Parzival_D_Phantom
True that .....such a good story it could have been an original on its own were it not for a fanfiction
I had to rewrite several parts of this chapter when i wrote it. I don't know if this is cringy or edgy or cool. So I'm eager to know your opinions. Please comment. - Rivenspree1mthCommented
In regards to your usual chapters it wasn't cringy, edgy sure and a lot more cool......though the story could have been explained a bit differently I guess. Though an amazing chapter nonetheless !! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I had to rewrite several parts of this chapter when i wrote it. I don't know if this is cringy or edgy or cool. So I'm eager to know your opinions. Please comment. - Rivenspree2mthPosted
One of my favourite fanfics currently. When starting this I had just hoped that it would include a good system, though what I got in return was so much more than just that. The way the SoL is written, the choice of songs, the overall pacing, charector development all are soo good. Just glad that I found this at the very start of its journey!
- Rivenspree5mthReplied to SweatySnail
- Rivenspree5mthReplied to Shiva16draig
Nopes.....this is a modern family Fanfic so yeah the career should be here and there but the most important characters should always be the star cast....or else it would just diverge to become something of and original with inspired characters and plotline
Ch 171 Chapter 171: Bro. - Rivenspree5mthCommented
Hey hey hey.....the teach was punished for interference in mortal matters to stay with Ed for his High school journey ....... what bout that????
Mrs Henderson who was standing amongst the crowd smiled at Edward's growth and said, "Goodbye Edward." - Rivenspree6mthCommented
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She smiled and skipped to the kitchen with a hum while I muttered sadly, "Now I know why she gave me the 'Kotoamatsukami'. It's to hypnotize myself so that I can finish the soup." - Rivenspree6mthCommented"Good. Last time, your guardian intervened so that the talent activation would fail. Now, you can have a normal relationship with the people around you and it won't turn into a 'creative tragedy'."
- Rivenspree6mthCommentedCh 6 Update for those worried:)
- Rivenspree7mthCommentedCh 146 Chapter 146: Charity Concert (3)
- Rivenspree7mthCommented
Don't taunt us author ...... you ain't playing fair with this
Edward's sweet and melting voice made many girls swoon once again. With a dazed face, Selena asked Taylor, "Hey, are you sure we can't share him?" - Rivenspree7mthCommented
One of the many reasons iIread this is because you try to depict a very very broad picture of the world as well as of the characters you write.........the last ryoma scene was also good and it's because not everything is straight forward.....there are indeed plans upon plans in the background, events connected to each other cause we have atleast 2 characters since kaguya planning and plotting in the dark so you depicting all these is a testament of you showing that the world is indeed complicated and not as simple as in the cannon where we face one villan then on to the next.......So very happy to read this Fanfic!!!
Anyway, I hope my reasoning satisfies you. - Rivenspree7mthCommented
Unlimited chakra vs gamers..........hehehehehehe looking forward to reading it
This paragraph has been deleted. - Rivenspree7mthReplied to eternal_flameCh 144 Chapter 144: Charity Concert (1)