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Astral_Sage3mthReplied to RigchelHe already had about 130 points. This trip to Gotham got him about 600.
"Well, that was a productive afternoon, if there ever was one..." I muttered to myself, barely holding back a grin. I brought up the system's interface and took a peek at my point balance. "730 points... close to 600 in one go, not bad..." I mused, contemplating the idea of making Gotham my stomping ground in the near future.- Astral_Sage4mthCommented
*underside of the city
In a desolate homeless area, the u side of a beautiful city with a beautiful name, known as starling city, the frantic sounds of running and heavy panting echoes through the alleyways, were a young man's eyes with a chilling reflection of despair and neglect. The ground was littered with filth and trash, creating a sickening tapestry of discarded waste. The stench of decay permeated the air, a constant reminder of the dire circumstances that befell this forgotten corner of society. Homeless individuals, worn and weathered by their harsh reality, huddled together amidst the over-piled garbage, their eyes vacant and souls weary, so basically, they are in hell. - Astral_Sage4mthCommentedCh -2 Writing Update/Rant...
- Astral_Sage4mthReplied to FoolishSociopath
I know it has been a while but thanks for letting me know! : )
Took some inspiration from LoTM with all the requirements and conditions for becoming a god or in this case a cosmic entity. Especially the whole become a symbol or concept stuffy, I can totally see that happening in LoTM. - Astral_Sage8mthCommented
What is LoTM?
Took some inspiration from LoTM with all the requirements and conditions for becoming a god or in this case a cosmic entity. Especially the whole become a symbol or concept stuffy, I can totally see that happening in LoTM. - Astral_Sage1yrCommented
I think you meant to put, “…because he was losing his voice amidst his laughs.”
This paragraph has been deleted. - Astral_Sage1yrReplied to Sorrias
You could also just use a period. And make it two seperate sentences.
"The coming days will be nothing but chaos because the World will witness a new era, one even I didn't see coming... Get Ace back here at all costs!!" - Astral_Sage1yrCommented
Oh, he’s going to ask Kuma for help. Well, time for Cherry to shine!
"Who's this now?" Cherry wondered. - Astral_Sage1yrReplied to I_am_truck_kun
I’m just saying a fire giant is the one who takes down Asgard while fighting Hella in the MCU.
"I Odin announces you Vulcan Odinson The God of Fire " . - Astral_Sage1yrCommented
I think you meant observed here rather than absorbed. : )
Landing on one of the higher roots, I looked down at the building, jumping from root to root as I absorbed the insides through one of the windows, using different angles to see the situation inside. - Astral_Sage1yrCommented
I can’t believe you made this list without red hair Shanks from One Piece!
Mc got reborn as Rias and eventually gets a chat group with a bunch of red-headed people from different worlds. Guy Crimson, Antares, Kurama, Poison Ivy, Jean Grey and Erza Scarlet. - Astral_Sage1yrCommentedCh 6 Pirates
- Astral_Sage1yrCommentedCh 39 Chapter 39: Goodbye
- Astral_Sage1yrReplied to Zanko
There is literally a scene on that island where they attack each other but Ussop runs out and gets hit by both.
"Maybe she isn't coming." Zoro said. "What did you say mosshead?!" Sanji yelled. "I said she might not come for you shit cook!" The two of them started a dust brawl while you could see Nami running toward the boat from the distance. They set sail as she jumped on and Kai used the wind to pickup the speed as the townspeople chased after Nami looking for there wallets. - Astral_Sage2yrCommented
Joining Ainz is a good setting for you to have an already established foundation that your readers understand. It takes the burden off of you a little bit when it comes to deciding base and characters as well. Ultimately the decision is yours but I recommend joint the guild. Great job with the story so far, very interesting!
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Thank you! ^_^
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What series is that from?
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