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Glutenfreechips1yrCommentedim pretty sure it should say, "...on how to become a wizard."
It was basically a book on how to start a wizard.- Glutenfreechips1yrReplied to LazyDeath
it makes sense but for consistency sake it would prob be best to just say Eli instead of host since the previous paragraph is also describing the life of the "host" in the past while using the name Eli
A few days ago, the host happened to see a hidden book in the library. Then, he secretly brought it back and opened it. Then, a strange wave attacked him. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
"tried" not tired
"Who are you and how dare you try to attack our second young master." The man carrying him roared angrily as he tired to move himself to cover the other man. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
grammatically this whole paragraph is very confusing and the choice of words makes it even more so
After basking on her glory for more than six years, Tong Yang had attracted some negative attention where some people who needed highly intelligent people to carry out some research. - Glutenfreechips1yrReplied to DayLo
yep. you can't really nod negatively anyways since that it not its meaning
"That would be all, I hope you don't mind that I'm paying with my card?" He asked gently and Yong Yue nodded negatively. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
I swear this type of writing is purely meant to give a sense of the main character's exceptional "intelligence" and "thinking" lol. not bad by any means I just find it hilarious
He took his time and picked a wide range of order while Yong Yue helped him put a tag on it so that they are easy to identify later on. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
this and the above paragraphs are so odd, why are they important to this part of the story LOL
But after spending two years training and being trained in that base, she was certain that she could take down average men and even the average trained man. - Glutenfreechips1yrReplied to Glutenfreechips
such novels these days surely don't exemplify good virtue and kindness it seems XD
Rong Yue nodded and left without even bothering to thank him, he was not a good person, so there was no need to treat him as one. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
how is he not a good person lol
Rong Yue nodded and left without even bothering to thank him, he was not a good person, so there was no need to treat him as one. - Glutenfreechips1yrReplied to Benrex777
you put it perfectly XD
Bai Zemin did not cry. After venting in an illogical but realistic manner, he simply became silent and motionless. - Glutenfreechips1yrReplied to Neilstone
I think the "imagination" aspect is key here. like how he needs to gain experience with his new abilities in order to imagine new things. Sort of like how an artist gains experience and practice in order to build their arsenal of mind references
The eyes of the three zombies exploded due to the internal heat and blood began to gush out like a fountain. Bai Zemin did not pass up the opportunity and spent another thirty points of mana to create three frozen blood arrows from the blood the creatures spilled, killing the three zombies at the same time. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
some of this grammar is confusing lol
Bai Zemin's eyes flashed and he quickly understood what the succubus behind him meant. With a thought, he spent fifteen points of mana fiercely reheat the blood inside the zombies' bodies and guided it to the eyes. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
I see, so in order to maximize stats its better to kill many different things. i wonder if this will be explored
Seeing his frown, Lilith, who had been silent, patiently explained: "The more creatures of the same type and level you kill, the less benefit you will get as your soul power acquires some resistance against them. Only by killing other creatures will you be able to acquire more benefits... Of course, you can still level up by killing those low-level zombies, but you will only get two status points when you level up, no extra benefits." - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
thats not a good sign. i hope they love eachother
Wu Hong: The mc's wife, which I honestly think he does not deserve; she's too good for him. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
Why not just give a professional character description. hard to take this work seriously
This paragraph has been deleted. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
again with the unrealistic dialogue. this is not a hallmark of good storytelling XD
"Hey, smile, I am the most beautiful and talented woman, you should show happiness because I fell in love with you and even accepted you as my husband." She smiled gently as she said that. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
I find it interesting how this style of narration is present in many japanese, korean, and chinese novels that attempt to establish an OP main character by having these weird self-conscious sentences. So unnatural to read tbh
I'm, of course, not a woman-obsessed man. I'm still a virgin even though I'm a hundred thousand years old and have great power in my hands, those two things are clear proof that I'm not an asshole. - Glutenfreechips1yrCommented
its a cultural thing
Currently, only the concubine son Bai Chen and the two concubine daughters could bother the fifth young miss. Of those three people, the fourth young miss Bai Hua was the most difficult to deal with. Born a week before Bai Yue, she often used her position as an older sister to bully Bai Yue. Also, both Bai Hua and her mother Concubine Xi were always scheming against someone in the house. Even though the Count was aware of this, he was a man and wouldn't lower himself to take care of household matters. - Glutenfreechips2yrCommented
do people actually mockingly smirk? im so confused
Ming closed her eyes and mockingly smirked when she started getting flashes of what had happened at the altar. - Glutenfreechips2yrCommented
This book has good writing.
Later on, when the Imperial City collapsed, that old man, who was nearing the end of his lifespan, ignored everyone's objections and mounted his horse. Together with his children, he died in battle for the Xia Dynasty.