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I've read this novel till chp 400 the author made the MC a beta male he forgives women as you change underwear. example nanyi he gave her 40yrs to choose him as an Husband and forgives her when she uses him who does that?, Many mighty man fell cause of women in rl. I understand you trying to show that your novel is an harem but it is. Pls Stop it.Also Stop trying to explain everything, Less is better so much filter over 400 chp and MC still Astral 3rd phase omfg. they're other things wrong with this novel but Author wont care but if anyone want to read it be advise it's really not worth it. It's Meh. Its no supremacy Games' Chaos heir Second World so much more.
I don't Usually post. but why must you make the MC A simp . MC invite Gwen to his room, and she betray his trust, but Mc doesn't care it's OK if a man does that to a woman he will be called all kind of words. That why I hate harem most mc are simp when it comes toward the opposite sex. Plus hes way to trustful towards ppl, he just got into a group and tell them that his biggest secret with ease his power comes from a ring. why wouldn't someone just cut his hands of and take the ring and kill him Author I know Its a fantasy but please don't insult the readers intelligent.