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DungeonLife4hCommentedCh 315 Don't Stop Me Now (3)- DungeonLife8hCommentedCh 166 Chapter 166: Therapy
- DungeonLife8hCommentedCh 325 Caught Ting-Lu
- DungeonLife9hCommentedCh 160 Chapter 160
- DungeonLife7dCommentedCh 311 Mystery of Chi-Yu
- DungeonLife7dPosted
The story is interesting enough to read until the end. I have gripes though with the MC and his attitude and I guess power scaling. Let's start with power, he is OP and well it didn't take that much time/chapters to be OP where he can basically do what he wants in Teyvat. Please tag OP I guess. The MC attitude where one group of bad Fatui make it okay to label and kill other Fatui is naive/edgy. Like please make him smarter, though I guess he doesn't need to be because OP. Dang. Yeah I guess the scaling is too fast for my liking. I like some parts of this story and dislike others huh, hope the rewrite makes it better.
- DungeonLife8dCommentedCh 309 Shiny Metang's Taste and Evolution
- DungeonLife12dCommentedCh 138 Chapter 138: Clearing the Clouds and Revealing the Sun
- DungeonLife14dCommentedCh 193 Chapter 193 What a Scumbag!
- DungeonLife15dCommentedCh 192 Chapter 192 Damn Moses!!
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Enkanomiya?
"The ones I called family were all killed violently by... Phanes, The Primordial One and their shades when they took over this world..." - DungeonLife16dCommented
Liyue?
"So far, I've been to Inazuma, Sneznyah and now Fontaine." - DungeonLife16dCommented
it's late
"Can you just get over it... Its late and I would rather just sleep than listen to you scream your head off." - DungeonLife16dCommented
of Furina
"Tell me Noctis what do you think or Furina?" she spoke her question without even looking toward me. - DungeonLife16dCommented
Iudex
"I believe I know who your mentioning, Iedux." I spoke up gaining a fed up expression for Arlecchino as she too spoke up - DungeonLife16dCommented
you're
"I believe I know who your mentioning, Iedux." I spoke up gaining a fed up expression for Arlecchino as she too spoke up - DungeonLife16dCommented
as well... nodded in agreement
"We don't know her personally but it works out Childe seems to trust her so I guess we should aswell." Surprisingly instead of an expression of disgust or annoyance Arlecchino nodded I agreement. - DungeonLife16dCommented
man's skin was
The man skims was pale and his facial features were refined, especially his eyes and lashes. It felt like I was staring at a marble statue the way he was so handsome yet so blank. His face held no expression of surprise, excitement, nervousness, it was a blank canvas. - DungeonLife16dCommented
had an underside of ???? blue
The person behind was taller, still wearing the same amount of blue. He had waist length white hair his hair seemed to have been combed to flick over his right eye, one strand even hand an underside of kggt blue. - DungeonLife16dCommented
be here soon
"Let's us take our seats. They will be her soon." She said as she pulled back a chair and sat on it crossing one leg over another.