St_Pat
Every fanfic is wish-fulfilment. Fav. Genre: Grimdark, LitRPG, Reincarnation, Self-insert, Strategy. Fav. MC Char: Amoral, Apathetic, Cunning, Perfectionist, Pragmatic, Ruthless, Scheming, Secretive
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Sorry about that. I am just used to distinction between thoughts and dialogues while reading. Anything inbetween double quotations I take it as dialogues/speaking. That's what most authors use to distinguish dialogues. And for thoughts, they use single quotations.
If so, then I must have misunderstood it for something else. My bad. It's just that, I am so used to the different quotations (single quotation for thought and double quotation for dialogues) use for distinction between thoughts and dialogues/speaking that anything inbetween double quotations I take it as dialogues.
Agreed. When there are Knights and others, so many kills single-handedly seem far-fetched.
Whole chapter was confusing. Can't even tell which are 'thoughts' and 'dialogues'. Why not distinguish both with single and double quotation? It is confusing because, if MC is talking then, why can't anyone beside him hear it. What about movement of mouth? Can't they see it?
Is he speaking out loud? If yes, then why can't woman hear him talking? And if this is thought, then you should distinguish between 'thoughts' and 'dialogues'. Maybe use single quotation for thoughts and double quotation for dialogues.
Too many grammatical mistakes.
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Is this 'thought' or 'dialogue/speaking'? Please distinguish between thought and dialogue/speaking. Like use single quotation for thoughts and double quotation for dialogues/speaking.
Developing 'morals' in shinobi world when he didn't even have them in his previous world, seems like the dumbest thing. 'Might makes right', 'Kill or be killed', 'Do or die', 'Law of the jungle' are some of the few rules that are BEDROCK of the 'Shinobi' world.