shadowsnake_13
I like to read good Harem novel and would like to write one. but I bad at spelling and grammer.
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shadowsnake_131yrCommentedI can ignore the fact that some of this s*** that they're so called humans are doing treating an alien like a human being I can ignore that but the moment you send an alien that looks like a f****** alien to go make a group of people on it and human world is f****** stupid I'm dropping this s*** because of that no human go okay alien from another world I'm going to work with you
Hondo Ohnaka was a Weequay male and an infamous pirate and outlaw who operated throughout the galaxy.- shadowsnake_131yrCommented
Strong ? that is little don't kid yourself
'Damn, I never thought my weapon was this strong…' - shadowsnake_132yrCommentedCh 9 Chapter 9
- shadowsnake_132yrCommented
this is not a fanfic. if you don't change something because of your characters choices because your character is supposed to know the story already of what's going to happen or some benefit he got from a God that makes it where his actions would be different from the main character otherwise you're just copying and printing someone's else's story that's not a fanfic you need to rethink this because everything is just going to repeat things and people are just going to skip you and after while they're going to drop you because it's pouring because they've already read it by the original writer
Ch 164 Chapter 163 - shadowsnake_132yrCommented
this is not a fan-fic its a copy of the story because a fan-fic and a reincarnation would change the story because they know wnat is going to happen but you are changing nothing which makes it the same story and would be fuck up and lsot of time reading same thing someone elsea write
Ch 12 Chapter 12 - shadowsnake_132yrCommented
no no no no just no you have so many things wrong with the order and somethings shouldn't work like the sonic device and how do the trickster know that Caitlin was working with the flash you miss a lot of stuff which doesn't make cent. so I'm dropping this
Ch 12 THE TRICKSTER(1) - shadowsnake_132yrReplied to Justice_Broughton_7309
then how do he get food and drinks at his house by magic?
'What kind of retard would actually believe my drink costs 1000 dollars? I guess I'll just roll with it,' The student thought. - shadowsnake_132yrPosted
- shadowsnake_132yrReplied to Shirofortuna
tell that to a female body builder and see what happen and you all are not getting it the sentence saying that if he stopped working out his would became weak as a girl. that is what I'm saying is sexual. because him stop working out and became weak has nothing to do with a girl because a girl can became strong by work out. it all has to do with you mind set not they gender no matter of their male biology or female biology. its all on if you have a strong will or weak will to do the work to became strong.
I went to class with Hermione. Just out of boredom. I needed a break from exhaustion training, even if I was weakening myself to a girl's level. - shadowsnake_132yrReplied to Crimson_ink
its not that its to much romance in one chapter and to much info on other characters other then the MC. and what i mean when i said romance count how many times that character says future-wife-to-be and you would understand why don't like this chapters.
Ch 82 Chapter 82: Is he like me? (b) - shadowsnake_132yrReplied to Tigerr_Koala
what chapter?
"I know. Your mother's maiden name was Black." - shadowsnake_132yrCommented
this guy a robot or what?
Ed might not like to play with girls but he knew what to expect, he was not ignorant about such matters, he just preferred to focus on his job rather than having fun. - shadowsnake_132yrReplied to LuigifromFBI
it has nothing to do with Biology any of that, you knowledge I know it might be harder for females to exercise but it still does not mean anything when it comes to Mills exercise when you exercise and get stronger you get stronger when you don't exercise just because you don't exercise doesn't mean you'll be weak as a girl there's no such thing as that because if you pair a male to a girl than they were a girl in the beginning with then
I went to class with Hermione. Just out of boredom. I needed a break from exhaustion training, even if I was weakening myself to a girl's level. - shadowsnake_132yrReplied to LuigifromFBI
I'm saying is that long is you put in the work or not has nothing to do the body type to say other wise is sexiest because you think that all female or weak by say "weak like a girl"
I went to class with Hermione. Just out of boredom. I needed a break from exhaustion training, even if I was weakening myself to a girl's level. - shadowsnake_132yrCommented
when did he tell her I don't remember any of it saying that you told her that you was the son of narcisa Malfoy I don't remember him telling anyone I can understand Harry and Ron because Sirius Black probably told them never said anything about her knowing
"I know. Your mother's maiden name was Black." - shadowsnake_132yrCommented
you're a sexist piece of s*** now saying even if I was weakened myself to a girl's level girls can be stronger than men sometimes you know if you ever seen weightlifters there's a female version where a guy you probably wouldn't be able to put up with those girls they probably snap you and f****** half you sexist pig and this is coming from another male
I went to class with Hermione. Just out of boredom. I needed a break from exhaustion training, even if I was weakening myself to a girl's level. - shadowsnake_132yrCommented
that is so ridiculous you don't have to tell anyone and what is with you and magical boys and s***
I dont like school, and this world really likes messing with me because the school bears a striking resemblance to the one I went to back at home.