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It's dissapointing that even after everything the story still follows almost exactly the movie....đ (the world is different, the family is different and the start was different... how is Apollo is still the same..... what about the things his biological parents gave him...đ¤
I like this fanfic. It's one of the better ones đ I'd like you to continue goin forfard without re-writes. (but i also wish that you would give him a litle bit more "humane" touch. That he fould "care" more about people and the world. He would have a romantic partner or two đ but no more than three. Also to evolve the fightin a litle bit from "spamming" the swords to "spamming" the swords kill the mops while personally fighting the important opponents đ) Thank you for so far đ
I don't like the drug use in the story. It makes it hard to become absorbed in the story.
Drug CPH4 from movie Lucy or would it be too over powered? (final form/god mode?)
sailing on a boat?
some where here because how Bella broke the rock with her had so easily.
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It would be much better to call him "Alan" than "Alan Taylor" all the time. it's so wierd to read that... đ¤˘
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