It's not bad at the start, but after he goes to the divine world it completely changes the pacing and theme, and by the time hes about to finish up everything in the divine world its basically just become another half-baked attempt at a sequel to journey to the west. the ending is rushed and unsatisfying, and listen man, I ain't into romance in these kinds of stories cause theyre usually written badly, but even I felt bad for my girl Qin Zimo near the end. like goddamn. girl made it her life's purpose and everything. also, he reincarnates without his memories at the end, but it isn't explained how? and its also just a complete copout ending to trigger the readers feelings, unsuccessfully mind you, since it couldve just as well been writtem so that he reached an overwhelming victory and didnt have to sacrifice himself. and like i said, he reincarnates with no explanation, so even the impact of his death is gone. Overall, the lower realm arcs were quote good, but the best part of the story after going to the divine world and onwards after that was just Han Zhen's shenanigans, honestly. Those got a chuckle outta me. rest becomes ass. still not the worst thing ive read, not even close, so credit where its due. overall, like a 8/10 until the divine world, and then a 6 or 7/10 after that till the end.

I'm surprised there isn't a page at the end (or a few pages) of her fangirling over her master. think about it, you get essentially adopted by who is essentially a god, and youre not gonna have some crazy fantasies?

It's contagious precisely because it makes sense.

See, where many might say that that is an exaggeration, I propose a different idea. Indeed, men ARE all perverts. It's just, little miss, why is it that...I seem to have seen women much prettier than you? And so, you see, I am not interested.

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nvm my previous comment, ig the granny is ugly after all

oooooh, i get it. its not that hes surprised cause the granny is ugly and his master wants her, hes surprised cause he thinks his master likes drugging women. so in conclusion, the granny is still hot. phew

78th. worth

bro, assuming -100 is the max for antagonism, this guy really almost maxed kit his score and probably formed a mental demon for himself in the process, all because the girl he was planning to r*pe was stronger than him and beat him up. how pathetic.

Matthew 3:2, 4:17 The kingdom of Heaven is at hand!

this is how im interpreting this, and i dont care if its wrong, this is my head canon now: "my cultivation base isn't the best, and she'll [drain me dry when dual cultivating with her higher cultivation. im already old, im not trying to get with a succubus and die.]

he increased agility so he can do cardio to lose weight. maybe

It's good for the industrial development, but industrial development is usually not that good for the people in the region.

Mother Nature does not need anyone's respect. Extinction is normal. let them hunt and kill them all. Such is the natural order of things, the whole idea of hunting to extinction being bad is a human idea, not a natural one. you think tigers care if humans go extinct? it's survival of the fittest.

Actually, more than breathing, it's about heart rate, since a high heart rate causes tremors in your arms and hands and makes it harder or even impossible to aim and shoot well. controlled breathing slows down heart rate, so mastery of breathing thus becomes essential.

Author, just a bit of advice, you really are gonna want to edit the beginning chapters for the grammar. You'll lose a lot of readers. I read until chapter 3 but couldn't keep going because of the grammar.

Bro, by the time he ascends to the throne, he doesn't need to kill her anymore. 🤦‍♂️

Little do they know their anger will only feed their adversary 🤣