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Horizon209

Horizon209

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2019-01-27 JoinedGlobal
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2098mth
    Posted

    She died bruh. Imagine spending almost 200 chapters reading about a character only to be killed while the mc just grabbed the sharingan. The mc is frankly a coward, a bit psychotic, and there's almost no character development since the mc is simply heartless. Also, the mc is talented as fuck to the point that he is too strong compared to his peers. Despite all that training, he didn't save her. The mc in reverend insanity is a psycho but at least he waits for his allies to betray him but this mc didn't even care. That is a sign of no moral and principles, a character that is too cold to the point that's annoying. This is my opinion so if you like this novel, more power to you! as for me..I'll head out

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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2098mth
    Commented

    Oh, luckily i skipped. She really died huh...i thought at least he would do something but I guess the mc is too much of a coward and frankly spineless.

    She attacked Obito with all her might. However, a rod pierced through her heart in the next second. Mieko coughed out blood as her memories flashed in her eyes.
    altalt
    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2098mth
    Replied to DaoistCaio

    Thanks for the spoiler!

    altalt
    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2098mth
    Replied to DaoistCaio

    Oh, so he decided to just not save her. Drop. It doesn't make the mc cooler, just psychotic and someone who has no morals.

    altalt
    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2091yr
    Replied to Ijekiel_Pendragon

    It will be a slow romance. Since I hate where the ml saves fl and the fl immediately blushed and falls in love. Also, don't worry. Catalinna would be more tolerable and gentle on some occasions.

    altalt
    Reincarnated with the author
    Fantasy · Horizon209
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2091yr
    Replied to AidenPierce72

    Both of them are different. Cain's system is a more a naturing type, the type that gives the mc power and boosts permanently every time he achieves quests and milestones. Meanwhile, the primal sin strictly gives a power up temporarily in exchange for sanity. The primal sin is more powerful in a fight but the system is more powerful in gaining power over time.

    altalt
    Reincarnated with the author
    Fantasy · Horizon209
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2092yr
    Replied to Iulian_Tranca

    Their personalities changed according to the characters of the novel they reincarnated to.

    Ch 6 CH 6
    altalt
    Reincarnated with the author
    Fantasy · Horizon209
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2092yr
    Replied to Iulian_Tranca

    I guess so. Despite being quite a cliche, the cousin has the backing of the General, which is one of the strongest people besides the Duke. Also, he's more talented than Lawrence and most of the higher-ups would rather have him as the heir. Indeed, the Duke wouldn't stand still if this happened to his son but he can't directly condemn the cousin. Unless Lawrence dies, the Duke can't do anything drastic to his nephew. Added bonus, the cousin can control the wind element, one of the unspoken criteria to be a heir of the Aenir Family. Still, i agree it is cliche, i would try my best to lessen the use of cliches in this novel

    Ch 7 CH 7
    altalt
    Reincarnated with the author
    Fantasy · Horizon209
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2092yr
    Posted

    A shameless review from the author itself. Just want to address this. There would be no harem. Despite using cultivation for its power system, The mc won't be able to mow down enemies that have a higher cultivation level than him. He would use his knowledge from reading the novel to gain every advantage he can to defeat stronger enemies. Additionally, the side characters, especially his allies won't just be a character whose use is to be shocked all the time whenever the mc does something relatively cool. They will grow stronger with the mc and are essential to the story and to the goals of the main character. Please comment if you see anything that should be criticized so I can improve this novel.

    altalt
    Reincarnated with the author
    Fantasy · Horizon209
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2092yr
    Posted

    Just a simple question. When does the mc save his family? I thought he would immedietly leave the group and go towards the area where his family is located. He doesnt seem to be worried

    altalt
    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2093yr
    Replied to AstralGodZero

    Thanks, i'll rewrite this anyway but thanks for the suggestion!

    You scratch your head as you look at the tombstone confusingly. You decided to crack open the tombstone which takes you a couple of hours with no proper tools. You opened the tombstone to see yourself laying down inside. You appeared to be sleeping but not breathing and suddenly all your vision turns to black.
    altalt
    David Jackson: The apocalyptic world full of monstrosity
    Fantasy · Horizon209
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  • Horizon209
    Horizon2093yr
    Posted

    Shameless move, i know but hey i'm the author. I'm quite new in writing a novel so i hope the readers can give some constructive criticism so i can improve the story

    altalt
    ALTERIA: THE FALL OF GODS
    Fantasy · Horizon209
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