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seeing that author's persistence I have decided to give this book a try to see why it is not getting the recognition from reader... tbh first chapter is the MOST IMPORTANT, from 1st ch readers (especially female readers/or maybe it's only me) decided whether to continue with the book or not when I started to read i feel like I am simply reading a text message umm... you can say I am not able to create the image of the character secondly, 1st pov is not that popular in webnovel. let's go back to the my review on the basus of first chapter your starting is that your character woke up and started to having breakfast (info dump) not an intriguing start.... Dear Author, I saw one of your reply to a comment that you won't be able to write if you don't get a feedback. So my feedback is that you have a potential to improve yourself as I can see you have been daily updating a chapter but you need to look into your work and compare it with other book to see what is lacking in your book... Nowadays readers are too lazy to write a review until unless your book is too good or it is too bad. i hope you I am able to convey my message to you. WISH YOU A GOOD LUCK i hope your next book will be a big hit 👍👍☺️☺️
Alright I give it a try to your book by reading further. Sorry but Your book isn't going to fit the taste webnovel readers. If you really wanted to make it better then i can only advice you to read top books from webnovel get better understanding how things work here
i doubt grandpa would become next physics genius
it's only 2nd chapter and i know it's too early to make judgement but story seems to be flat... i can tell Amna wanted a second chance to fix everything and fit into society (maybe) but you need to add a some plots or twists or purpose or you can read some other rebirth books to check how they added scenes or twist in their chapters
girl u r scratching her wound...🤭🤭
alright I'll re-read that part and thanks for giving detailed explanation 😘😘
ohh i haven't read riftan's pov....i was waiting for book 2 at that time 😅😅😅
i feel left out everyone seems to be excited about sir Erien, but i can't recall who is this new char 🥺🥺
riffy u r such a blockhead
😮 I think she/he was a attention seeker, demanding for attention by posting hateful comments 🤦🤦