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TheAldrich2yrCommentedCh 46 46.TRUST- TheAldrich2yrCommentedCh 26 Chapter 26. Goddess’ gifts
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The story starts well with a cool main character that does some badass things. However after a while he gets entangled with idiotic females and it just becomes a dumb song and dance every chapter. The book is about an assassin, not about all these people that keep hanging on the MC's feet. Quite boring even though it had potential. 3/5
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U need a nice warm cup of green tea sir. Please calm down with these ideas.
"What can we say? Some people are born to be psychopaths. Unfortunately, this psychopath happened to be the son of a great man," he further said. - TheAldrich2yrCommented
Literally the same as little queen.. [img=faceslap]
"How about I call you 'Little Ming' then…" he came up with a name on the spot and then proposed it to her. - TheAldrich2yrReplied to TheAldrich
To add to this; the MC has pork, meat in addition to many other types of food have natrium inside then already. Adding more is usually not needed at all unless its because you want to adjust the flavour with it as a type of spice.
Salt was definitely a necessary resource. Human beings would become mentally weak and physically fatigued if they did not consume salt for a few days. Not eating salt for ten consecutive days might even lead to death. - TheAldrich2yrCommented
It's good for a healthy diet. Natrium is needed, but it's not a must like the mc describes.
Salt was definitely a necessary resource. Human beings would become mentally weak and physically fatigued if they did not consume salt for a few days. Not eating salt for ten consecutive days might even lead to death. - TheAldrich2yrPosted
Honest review here. There are alot of errors in this novel. The story itself may be good, sadly its glory has yet to show due to this issue. Every time I open a new chapter i get bombarded by mistake after mistake. I suggest getting someone to proof read chapters or edit them. The potential is there. Sadly basic understanding of the English language is letting this novel down.
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A silence is only awkward if you make it awkward.
The Panda didn't need to be here right now but the creature was resting against the glass window. The small round of ball fur had raised hell on him for losing charm points, it spoke up once more. "Damn awkward silences, fill it in!" - TheAldrich2yrCommented
Ah nice, a fresh mtl novel. Oh wait, it's also about pet beasts? 😴😴
Global Pet Beast, Starting with Pet EggsdetailPet Beasts of the World: Hundred-Fold Multiplier SystemEastern · Fifty Bucks for A Thousand Words - TheAldrich2yrCommentedCh 82 The Seed of Darkness
- TheAldrich3yrCommentedCh 138 Mirabelle's Lifespan (2)
- TheAldrich3yrCommented
Why are the slime coming...* Why did that cave suddenly appear* Was it due to the eartquake*
"Why the slimes are coming from that cave while the dragons suddenly appeared?" Ryan asked himself. "Why that cave suddenly appeared? It was due to that earthquake?" - TheAldrich3yrCommented
What is it with all female characters screaming in ALL CAPS non-stop?
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I'm asking this question too. The whole situation is overexplained making it hard to get a good picture of the storyline.
What happened - TheAldrich3yrCommented
Isn't Irauk linked to something demonic anyway?
Once again, the two continued to discuss the matters of Apollo. Due to their similar abilities, they experienced firsthand the possibilities that existed with Apollo's Hellfire. However, little did they know they both planted seeds of despair. Hellfire was not meant to come in contact with anything besides a Demon. - TheAldrich3yrCommented
Maplestory :)
{As for your final question, you will be granted 5 Ability Points (AP) and 3 Skill Points (SP) after every level up at the Amateur stage. You will be able to add AP to any of your stats at any time. Similarly, SP can be added whenever you desire to strengthen any one of your skills.} - TheAldrich3yrCommented
Your*
"Then, you won't be able to enter the best place here, the Tethered Shadow Origin room. Furthermore, if you have 0 credits for more than one week, you're enrollment will be revoked," Sapphyr answered calmly. - TheAldrich3yrCommented
Health*
[Heath is upgraded from stamina x 1.5 to stamina x 4] - TheAldrich3yrCommented
'Emotional value'
"What!?" Xia Fei was so excited that he nearly fell off his chair. This unassuming ring was actually worth 1.6 billion star coins. Isn't it enough to purchase the entire Beijing City?!"