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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings30d
    Replied to Covetousness

    Grand disciple, you're still green! Kneel down before this Grand Master who has already been enlightened in the DAO of MTL.

    MY DEMON SYSTEM: IMMORTAL WARS
    Fantasy · Dark_knight234
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    Dead_Kings3mth
    Replied to DaoistjVvre2

    a harem of 4 in light novels is fine, but harem gets a bad rap cos many many bad authors start off with a few good love interests then add more like the mc is collecting Pokemon. Basically, all the different girls personalities blend into a few different personalities and by the time the 20th member gets added the reader starts to forget their names. After the 40th member gets added women are just plot devices/r-rated scenes for fan service. In any book to immerse yourself, you have to remember a lot of information like character powers, power systems, world building geography/lore, item history, inter-character relationships, foreshadowing references/hint and much more. If you have to remember the nth harem member as well as their relationship history with other characters and the mc to understand the context of the plot/r-rated scenes/dialogues then your mind starts to think "whats the point? why do I bother?" and turns off. This is why harem is a hated tag.

    Primogenitor in Marvel
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    Dead_Kings3mth
    Replied to ZeaZ_

    yeah but time stop for the entire earth the instant it enters not just the people, so time would only return to normal after leaving the space pocket

    I can not make you a god but a demigod(It's a status, not a power), If I made you a god then you will not be able to enter those worlds. You will be my son from now on, you will also have my divine aura which will separate you from all the higher beings as their superior and your official work position will be called God's advocate. Along with your powers, I am granting you a dimensional pocket to store things in it. It is as big as the size of your milky way galaxy. You can even store the whole earth in it, but I advise you to not do it as it would kill everyone on it as the time doesn't move in it... That's it then, any more questions my son?"
    Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]
    Book&Literature · MisterImmortal
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings3mth
    Commented

    To death due us part 😉

    "Very good choice, son. There is nothing in heaven except all you can eat food and forever ongoing orgies." God said, omitting some other not so important details, according to him.
    Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]
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    Dead_Kings3mth
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    I think the author should've started us easy with a few enemy bases, some supply lines or a few strategic forts instead of having the very first mission be taking out one of the axis powers. It would've been fine after a few dozen missions or even just 10, a system's points shouldn't be given out too easily. An example of this using the current mission his having the mission succeed then as the mc is a covert commando have his name scrubbed from short term record then have him gain respect long-term after the war. The mc's reputation should ideally be 300-500 in odd ended numbers. Long term mc should be rewarded maybe 1000-2000 when it's announced/recorded then +1 notifications every so and so until it vissles out.

    'How much reputation can I gain by becoming a conqueror of Italy?'
    Marvel's Superman [Completed]
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings3mth
    Replied to DaoistsexGSu

    rhen > then

    If the mission planned by Colonel Philips could be accomplished, rhen, Luke's name is likely to spread throughout the Allies.
    Marvel's Superman [Completed]
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings3mth
    Commented

    Surely being in a COVERT commando unit doesn't command much respect

    'It seems that by generating respect, worship and admiration, I can gain reputation points ...'
    Marvel's Superman [Completed]
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings3mth
    Commented

    For you sanity assume the golden kyrptonite game is like injustice for the remainder of this book

    [Reward: Scarecrow's fear poison gas ×10.]
    Marvel's Superman [Completed]
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings3mth
    Commented

    Bro had at least 5000 mana, so 5k - 1.1k is 3.9k, lol shouldn't he still be fine bruh

    [Mana has gone down the critical levels, Shutting Down host's brain Due to Mana Deficiency]
    Reincarnated with the Mind Control Powers in Another World.
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings5mth
    Replied to Andrew_Midkiff_g7L

    author realised he created a plothole and before you say kurai sensei isn't good at black ops for causing a pertentual info leak, know that she just doesn't care

    "Dear Axel Hunt (Or Chris Martin?),"
    HP: The Arcane Thief
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings5mth
    Commented

    but its necessary

    When he realized that he was already famous here, Axel put his hand to his forehead. It seems this is something he has thoroughly failed to avoid here as well. 
    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings5mth
    Replied to InsanityX

    thats a better name lol

    (Algal=viral, Deepnet=Internet)
    HP: The Arcane Thief
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings5mth
    Commented

    Whats with all the pedo jokes and the pedo character? It's obviously looked down on canonically

    Imagine the team that was forming up in her head, Kyrin grinned. "I have a feeling… the Squid Harvest this time is going to be bountiful."
    HP: The Arcane Thief
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings5mth
    Replied to Basically_God

    bruh missed opportunity

    On the other hand, not at all aware that he had been seen through yet again, Axel was currently in the room which had been temporarily allocated to him while the result of the trial and his recruitment was still unclear.
    HP: The Arcane Thief
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings5mth
    Commented

    Isn't is obvious "he" is Voldemort with all the foreshadowing with the vampires, werewolves, and tristan hunt lol

    One of the elders just shook his head. "That won't help us much, will it? Nothing would work if we don't stop 'him'. He would just start doing it himself after he is healed."
    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings6mth
    Posted

    The book shouldn't be called "My three beautiful wife's are vampires" it should be called instead "My 83 beautiful wife's belong to the myriad races" lol. Character design is pretty good but there are so many wife and their mums that they all blur into about 20 that my mind can recall at any one time. The hell arc was pretty cool tho all in all tho mc should've stuck with either the og 3 or og 3+their mums instead of the countless ones (mc's mum was almost included)... In the last novel author was collecting reward chests, no mc/author do be collecting women lol smh

    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
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    Dead_Kings7mth
    Commented

    Why does the author narrate colt's life in present tense third person all the time, instead of past tense first person or past tense second person? It's getting pretty annoying.

    Colt was ready, he was ready to increase his popularity to the populace, to prove himself he was a man amongst men, and as the carriage ride took only a few minutes to reach the Dragonheart Academy, he and his partner stepped out of the carriage in full style!
    High-Class Mob
    Fantasy · Seyer_Jad
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings7mth
    Replied to QuestionableReadin

    Plot armour is not wished for but comprehended young one

    21. Wishing for plot armor is not viable
    High-Class Mob
    Fantasy · Seyer_Jad
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings1yr
    Posted

    interesting premise, bad reviews in the comments. I tried to look past the negative reviews and read it for myself, how naive I was. The premise of a fog filled thriller survival game got me going, I wanted to like this so much. However, I couldn't get past ch 10 ffs, the author has a habit of creating problems, enemies and dangerous situations for little to no reason under the guise of "character development" when the situation can be solved by a level up or a healing care it isn't used; when food can be used strategically to form key bonds with the community or nonsensical battle stat inconsistencies. What's the point of having a high spec monster summon when it gets beaten by a noob half it's stat value, even when it has a x2 medal buff? I don't know... honestly, so far the whole thing feels unnatural and forced, if you want to have dragon fairy npc lose a battle, the fair enough, but at least get the underlying logic right. I can't deal with this exhausting book, well you've been warned. If it gets better so be it, at least I won't be here for when it gets worse.

    Misty World: Start with SSS skill
    Fantasy · HikaruKiki
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  • Dead_Kings
    Dead_Kings1yr
    Replied to Elroyleday

    If he's providing the resources but other people are benefiting for free then what's the point? There's also the point of holding a monopoly and not arming his potential future enemies, if he controls this new resource it's enough to start an organisation built upon it.

    Hikaru: "I provide Soul Points for you to create cards and food and water. However, you can only deal with me alone. If you trade with someone else, I'll kill you. Wherever you are, I will find you. If you are loyal to me, I will protect you."
    Misty World: Start with SSS skill
    Fantasy · HikaruKiki
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