that disclaimer was not there when I made this comment he or she put it up afterwords

this is a copy of a relly good fanfiction from imjusttryingtofindmyway look it up ob fanfiction.net if you want to read the whole story. 😡😭😭

cool I feel this arc dragged some so I'm pleased it see it end

that image is going to live in my mind rent free for a long while.

I agree with most of this I liked the novel at first but then the author brought In the real world aspects and it just got worse and worse from then I rely dislike when a game novel can effect the real world because then the game becomes just a delivery system for real world 🌎 power. it's not about the game anymore.

who do I talk to about what genre this is in because this is not at video game novel other then that it's good. 10101000100011100101101000111000

I was reallylike the story but then this man (the author) go and takes all of the supporting cast out with a 900 plus year time skip. that being said I really enjoyed how the author wrote the rpg systems it's one of my favorite rpg/ level systems I've read in a novel.

I'm about two seconds form dropping this story if this situation isn't resolved in a satisfactory manner. even in fiction I can't tolerate this. there are so many problems with this economicly,morally,and Socially in most of the. now it hurts me to say the only reason I read is to find out how this is going to be resolved.

the read aloud for this app sucks

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I feel as if the story's narrative tension almost completely disappeared at around chapter 400.

to be honest I dont relly know why I dont like it it just seems like propaganda to me. dont get me wrong I like the system idea I just dont like how it was executed.

Translation was amazing until turtle stop then all of the term and name changes broke my immersion. I had to stop reading after that because it took me the fris 200 ch to get who everyone was stright in my head. Ps sorry for the run on sentence.