0vrLrd71
My senior quote was "Do they expect me to write something? Yeah, no." That's pretty cringe, should have actually thought it out, instead of giving one on the spot, that should say something about me..
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0vrLrd7113hReplied to DeathOfDeathdecent? bro...
Well that's one group confirmed and it's best to avoid them if I can. Their stories always involved genocide, time travel, and crazy experiments that could doom humanity. All things in which I want nothing to do with even if they have some of the best waifus like Storm, Jean, and Rogue.- 0vrLrd7116hCommented
Oh, I remember reading something like this in mtlnation or archive now
Wait, Confess To Three Heroine!? - 0vrLrd7116hReplied to LuluViBritania
I'm pretty sure this is translated, lulu
–Toujou Koneko. - 0vrLrd7117hReplied to Mental_dao_master
I have its actually pretty common way to refer to spineless guys that won't go on an offensive in relation to girls
[Host, you are unexpectedly astute and surprisingly not a vegetarian.] - 0vrLrd711dReplied to IamBot03
I'm pretty sure my middle schools health and economics teacher got involved with students seeing when at the end of the year when we were graduating she gave out con doms as part of her class and mafe some inappropriate comments
Uh... there's a woman giving me coy eyes. Am I triggering her maternal instincts? Or something like that? - 0vrLrd711dReplied to DimensionalDaddy
I do know it's possible, I just can't help but think of it as unrealistic seeing how it never happened to or close to me
Now at Noah's school, not only does he not have many friends, but his friends are clumsy people who don't know how to talk properly, they only talk about subjects that I don't really care about, and to make matters worse, the 'bullies' at this school still pick on him. - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
haha, imagine if it's not her head
I sat down next to her on the bed, put my hand where her head was and began to stroke it lightly. - 0vrLrd711mthReplied to Dragaim
pay p @l, koffee, subscribestar or something, etc, it could be any of them
When I sent my virtual account for the transfer, Werewolf transferred it without a second thought, leaving me a little surprised at how easily this person trusted me, but I didn't care much and took advantage of the time left to start this artwork. - 0vrLrd711mthReplied to OnlyGoodStuff_1
Okay, who that
Today I'm going to walk 5 km in 1 hour. I thought resolutely as I started to run. - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
the censor got better at shadow banning comments
There, now I knew what I had to do to make money fast. If there was one thing I remembered from my previous world that shocked me, it was a girl in my class who made a lot of money just by drawing animal characters to sell on Twitter, apparently she sold each drawing for at least $100... what was it called? Furra, Furre, Furry! I can start selling these artworks for $30, which will help a lot to pay for the things I need in the beginning, but if I gain fame, I can raise this price in the future! - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
If the dad gets a decent place as a new job they'll probably let him work at home most days if he has a decent computer set up, except when he needs to be in person at the office - that way the mother can also worry less and get a job if she really wanted to
With a disapproving smile, Lauren looked into the camera as she sighed. "He's only doing this because I can't work... I've tried everything, but since Ethan was born, I can't take my mind off things for a second, thinking that the kids at home might be in trouble, and I don't know anything about working from home..." - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
wow dude, you really are a psycho, first straight up reacting to a minor bullying with straight up intent to harm, and then this? I would have thought you would at least give it a skim over to get ideas as to how to use your system, its always a good source whenever you wanted to learn or create techniques, powers, and/or moves
I didn't like this stuff anymore and it would just gather dust in my room, since my parents probably don't have the money to give me to buy a guitar, I can get rid of it and get what I want. - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
this really broke the immersion, honestly it could be easily edited to make it seems like it's a small pov shift and showing her thoughts and a couple mumbles and it'll flow better than whatever this is
Until she finally cracked a smile. "Even though he was scary, I have to admit, he seems to have become cooler after acting like that, I've never seen him like that." - 0vrLrd711mthReplied to Space_kook
"What subjects?"
Now at Noah's school, not only does he not have many friends, but his friends are clumsy people who don't know how to talk properly, they only talk about subjects that I don't really care about, and to make matters worse, the 'bullies' at this school still pick on him. - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
Okay. I dont have experience with this so I always feel weird when reading about bullies in high-school or middle school, I guess that's just so unrealistic to me that it's weird
Now at Noah's school, not only does he not have many friends, but his friends are clumsy people who don't know how to talk properly, they only talk about subjects that I don't really care about, and to make matters worse, the 'bullies' at this school still pick on him. - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
should change out it to his, "to make /it/ his* like mine"
When Ethan came downstairs and saw my hair, his shock was as great as my mother's, but unlike her, who was shocked and concerned, Ethan just got excited when he saw my hair and asked me to make it like mine. - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
less anger and more irritation, it's not easy to truly become angry unless one has issues, plus the interaction beforehand was less something to be angry at, and more irritated, vexed, or annoyed, since it's just a typical sibling moment
Instead of the anger she was showing Noah at that moment, Olivia had a slightly surprised expression on her face as she sat on the sofa and looked into the camera. - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
this is what I mean, you could have used this as a point where she interacts with Noah as a way to show that the family dynamic is getting better or to demonstrate more depth for a character but you relegated it to side commentary that didn't really progress character relationships
"Even though I was worried about him, just seeing the confidence he showed made me so proud, and the reassurance he gave me, like everything was under control when he cut his hair, really convinced me!" She said excitedly. - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
I don't like this honestly, it isn't a sitcom or reality TV show, or even total drama, it doesn't fit the type of story this is , plus it's like a cheap way to give info (even if in character thoughts) without putting as much effort into a cohesive story- dont get me wrong, you have good writing, but I just think these section break the narrative and immersion
-------- Lauren Commentary -------- - 0vrLrd711mthCommented
wow dude, she barely worried and you are already close to snapping at her? calm tf down
"Mom, calm down. I didn't hurt myself, my hair is fine, nothing bad happened, you know? There's nothing to worry about, I watched a lot of videos before you did this to me. Now calm down, okay?" I said in a serious voice as I put my hands on her shoulders and spoke in a calm tone.