ChaoticOrder101
Secret. Financial Investigator no lie this is real, also explains why everything else is a secret.
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ChaoticOrder10116dCommentedBuy stark industries stocks. Money is limited despite being a millionnaire but he needs passive income since he will need to be independant of his parents
Iron Man I was presently underway. Having been missing for fifty days, Tony Stark will likely get 'rescued' in the coming month, only to make his grand declaration to the world. This won't happen for another month or so, that meant I have some time to work with in regards to the MCU-verse.- ChaoticOrder10119dCommented
I didn't hear of the plague monarch for a while. Almost forgot about her
"My liege,we have taken of him,you may now pass on your judgment to him"Igris said bowing down to which Kenzo nod before taking the dagger that Igris was offering him approaching the frost monarch and saying "Like i said at the begining of this fight,you three would make a great addition to my army" - ChaoticOrder10119dCommented
So vague. Did they bore his hand into the beast monarch heart or decapitated him. Need more descriptions on the actions.
Before the Beast Monarch could fully grasp the implications of his new fate, Kenzo, without a hint of remorse, put an end to the monarch's existence. The battlefield bore witness to the swift and decisive judgment, and the life of the once-proud ruler of beasts flickered out like a dying ember. - ChaoticOrder10119dCommented
Dude. The wording is very, very repetitive and annoying. Use them once and continue the flow with more details of the fight. Fist to face, leg, counters, flips, blows that crush the defense and being repelled from someone.
The Frost Monarch reveled in Kenzo's suffering, sadistic delight evident in his demeanor. "Let's see if you heal now like you did last time," he taunted, stabbing the dagger deeper into Kenzo's body with a twisted satisfaction. The once-mighty monarch, now reduced to a figure writhing in pain, bore the weight of his choices and the consequences of his actions. The battlefield, once a stage for his dominance, now witnessed a monarch grappling with mortality and the cruel reality of being labeled "incomplete" in the eyes of his merciless adversary. - ChaoticOrder10129dCommented
With the beast girls I agree.
It was because the human heart was complex. The rules and regulations restricted and bound people, people had way too many calculations in their heads, and most importantly, there were no beastgirls on Earth. - ChaoticOrder10129dReplied to UT_007
That's like saying everyone on Earth is bad or untrustworthy. Incorrect.
"Nothing could be used to exchange for such a life." Lucas thought of the days on Earth and knew that even if he was rich, he wouldn't be able to enjoy such a relaxing life like this one. - ChaoticOrder1011mthReplied to Malcolm_Massey
Thank you. There is no relationship ongoing
[It's basically that, I remind you that all the girls who are in a hentai harem will be part of the harem of the protagonist, so if you captivate them, it can obviously be considered as if you are stealing their women, isn't that what a character who does Netorare does?」 - ChaoticOrder1011mthCommented
Bruh....he sounds like a deluded loser. sighs. Crazy pyschos are all the same.
'Let me save the day as the kind hero I am~' He wore his gloves with excitement on his face. - ChaoticOrder1011mthCommented
Gross. Nothing pleasant about a fishy smell.
The air was filled with a musky and fishy smell but the smell was oddly.... pleasant? - ChaoticOrder1011mthCommented
Nah, my dawg that was funny. You did zoro dirty lol
[Because of Zoro's joining, he often challenged Kuina several times a day, and sometimes challenged you, but after you beat him to the point where he know left and right, he gave up challenging you completely. ] - ChaoticOrder1011mthCommented
Decent description. dialogue needs work though. There's certain you say and don't say in bed. Otherwise good job
So how was the first R18 of this story? - ChaoticOrder1011mthCommented
Bro, nobody says that unless your an immature virgin. Mc needs to chill. Less talking, more screwing
"… How is it? I'm sure I'm bigger than anyone inside you before, right?" Jin-Woo smirked, his voice demanding - ChaoticOrder1011mthReplied to Rgendamushrooms123
Ohhh thought it was a different kind of clapping.
CLAP...CLAP...CLAP - ChaoticOrder1011mthCommented… If that's the case, why do I see small traces of wetness – she didn't just put her love juices on it, did she?
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If till now they couldnt kill the current dragon gods what makes him think he can kill Silva? Mental Health is a real thing for these kind of characters.
Georg froze upon the description they explained smirking as his lips grew upon the realization finally responding happily, "Oh? Is that so huh… seems like this foreigner has a lot of eyes around him. Such a troubling lad but one that can lead me to where Selene the Moon Dragon God flesh into my mouth… such an unknown taste palate that I can't help but want!! Hahaha!!! Change of plans I'm tagging along to force that kid to cough up!! With you four he will be no match against the Dragon Slayer's might of Diabolos!!" - ChaoticOrder1011mthCommented
Personality is definitely like loki. Me like it
He will never Hulk Puny God me ever again!! - ChaoticOrder1011mthCommentedSilva viewed Raven Tail through Spectator examining everything and smiling seeing Flare Corona hasn't been recruited yet sighed in relief.
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Very good. Luck is a factor in battle
Everyone's expressions lost a few shades of color seeing the lineup as Makarov continued his explanation in a serious tone, "Only the teams who have successfully completed their paths will pass the first test! Of the 9 paths, the 'Battle' routes are where two teams will bump into each other. Only one team can pass through the end. Where it says 'Fierce Battle' you won't be able to advance unless you defeat an S-Class Wizard. Those are the toughest routes. The 'Peace and Quiet' path is one where there will be no battles. It's an automatic pass to the second test. The aims of the first test are fighting and luck!!!" - ChaoticOrder1011mthCommented
Restore him limbs
How strong and deadly it was fighting Acnologia for even his stats to be affected that much fighting the Arcane Dragon. - ChaoticOrder1011mthReplied to sanampatel881
Why does the tan dude give me NTR bad guy vibes??? He just needs blond hair
The lights were out except for one area revealing 3 pretty boys announcing to us, "Members of Fairy Tail! We've been waiting for you! We are the chosen ones of Blue Pegasus! The Tri-Men!!!"