FictionalJack
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FictionalJack1dCommentedYes take their sight so the can feel the pain even more
Yes, Mr bandit who has stupidly chosen to ruin our travel with our infinitely benevolent Master, would you like me to start with your left eye first, or your right eye?- FictionalJack1dCommented
Oh I bet they would love that
I idly wondered what I could do to help them get along? Maybe a group cultivation session would help? - FictionalJack1dCommentedI'm dead.
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And Toin only won with 14-0, yeah Naoki made a HUGE mistake and he’s gonna be hurting cause of it
Ken nodded. "We beat Zama High in the 4th innings, 20-0." - FictionalJack2dCommentedCh 147 Motivations (1)
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Nope found it on the internet
A/N: "BuT aUtHoR-kUn, It DoEsN't MaKe WhY wOuLd It WoRk, DoEsN'T hE nEed MaGiC CiRcU—" - FictionalJack3dCommentedThis made Devon laugh, and she replied, "I'd like you to be tough."
- FictionalJack4dCommentedCh 145 Overwhelming (1)
- FictionalJack4dCommentedHe finally understood why his Crunch Time skill activated in that moment. Somehow the system had detected that if he smashed the first pitch it would do enough mental damage to take the Ace off the mound.
- FictionalJack6dCommented'Hehe more fools have decided to join.'
- FictionalJack7dCommented"Alright, with this, we finish the debate, and the results will be decided by the audience entering the QR code on the screen; you decide who won."
- FictionalJack7dReplied to SrCuervo"You know perfectly well that they would win by just getting you expelled from school for a few days. Unlike them, you have a future." Devon didn't stop even when she felt Dash's hand squeezing hers tightly.
- FictionalJack8dCommented"You know perfectly well that they would win by just getting you expelled from school for a few days. Unlike them, you have a future." Devon didn't stop even when she felt Dash's hand squeezing hers tightly.
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I don’t know but what I do know is that just one bite and your throwing everything you ate back up
The smile on Dash's face couldn't be hidden when he mentioned this because he wanted to try the food sold in this country. Of course, the language barrier might complicate things a bit, but nothing that couldn't be solved with Mr. Kim's presence. - FictionalJack10dCommented
I’ve always wanted to try stinky tofu, if I ever got a chance to visit China
The smile on Dash's face couldn't be hidden when he mentioned this because he wanted to try the food sold in this country. Of course, the language barrier might complicate things a bit, but nothing that couldn't be solved with Mr. Kim's presence. - FictionalJack10dPosted
It’s DBZ in DXD, all fighting with no story development. All that happens is the MC gets mad or something then ends up fighting with someone and before and after the fight its just unintelligent nonsense until he fight with the person again. Instead of having dialogue it’s just cursing and Chinese fanfic insults. Decent concept but very poorly executed
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She when from beast to this after hearing Ai
His mothers sweet voice rang out as she suddenly appeared in front of them both, a wonderful smile on her face. - FictionalJack11dCommentedHis mother peaked her head around the corner, her eyes seeming almost red as they reflected the sunrise which peaked in through the window.
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The story is alright, it started off good and then kinda just got stale. I know the author said that it’s a slow burner of a book but with 113 chapters and the only thing to happen was them winning there second game and the ML supposedly training but still not able to make a basket without luck it’s kinda getting a little old and annoying. As well with the ML being able to get a academic scholarship and able to analyse his old teammates, he should be able to make himself a better basketball player a lot faster then what has been happening. I also think that the system is more of a hindrance that anything but who knows maybe after 8 more upgrades he’ll finally be able to shoot a basketball and have a high chance of scoring.