Adding spaces is such a pain like mind-numbing - is this good spacing?

You are most welcome, friend!

Yeah, my bad for the spoilers, since I've only recently uploaded chapter 18 :P

Chapter 18, explains this. He'll be sent to the helios station for an upgrade. They'll meet on the Station.

True, I was debating on whether it should be present but noticed that it's told through Marcus as a story, we might void it.

Thanks for the constructive criticism I appreciate you interacting with the story. Keeps me engaged and encourages me to write better. I'll try and improve for the next arc since borderlands 1 is coming to an end.

Xion D. Demillion alternative three:

Xion D. Demillion alternative two:

Xion D. Demillion:

What the, I just posted a minute ago.

Ah the Destroyer part, fair nough. I'll try and flesh out the characters more than. I'm not exactly a fan of stretching fight scenes out to much, i'll try my best to expand. I guess the vault couldve done more on expanding I think I focused a tad bit more scenes on his kingdom building.

Isaac Sato no. 3

Isaac Sato no. 2

Isaac Sato no. 1

For some reason your reveiw isn't showing up.

I think it appears that way simply due to how large the chapters are. Thanks for the feedback I appreciate the Reveiw. Also how would you reccomend slowing the pace of the story? I thought it was already slow as is. It took around 12 chapters to kill the destoryer.

Thanks for the review! Preciate your support and comments.

You are most welcome

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