try using AI to fix the grammars/sentence so it will be easier to read, or use software like grammarly because the story are great

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you should wait until you have 40 chap or so and have no reason to drop it, because the 40 chap is a good indicator for readers that you won't drop the novel without telling them.

are you dropping this author? because there's haven't been an update for weeks ☹

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