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I've seen this conversation with Fire Emblem Fates
is he working for a supervillain or was he a supervillain, who has random failsafes to not get abducted from your work
The third hokage only viewed naruto as a weapon just like all the other villages and their jinchuriki. The third also wanted naruto to depend on him as that would him easier to control, and the villages did this since they would be relying on the strength of the tailed beasts rather than their host.
Why would he let her live
I know, don't want to rely on it and I wouldn't use it to make an original novel. I'm trying to learn from it to see if my writing improves that's why I'm doing the fanfic as practice, once I feel good enough I will continue the og one.
I was originally going to write a OG novel and this as a secondary thing. The ai took the chapter that I originally made and made it so much better, made me depressed I haven't wrote a 2nd chapter for the OG one after that.
it is revised with ai, after writing something do revise then in quotation marks put what you want it to revise. The AI took away all my confidense in writting after seeing it's revisions.
Who tries to threatens an undead
I read this in skelethor's voice
It's Neptunia, now from which media I don't know probably the anime.
While that's true if it stayed with this concept, but author made exceptions to this such as sword fighting experience and battle hardened demeanor in combat. This however is just a tiny gripe that I have story itself is pretty good.
he should be more like this
He started with nothing, the things he did and learned was through actual years of experience, it was not learned through a system, or game like mechanic meaning that he should know this and not have to pay in a system interface for something that he himself learned and knows how to do.