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Bersrkr16dReplied to 20thCenturyPharaohaccording to google, yeah.
Opening my eyes, I noticed several things very wrong. First I was definitely not in the middle east as I was currently surrounded by a forest of trees in all directions. Plus it was a very comfortable temperature, almost perfect seventy degrees with little wind going by. Then my senses quickly became overwhelmed as I could smell everything around me and hear what sounded like deer nowhere near my eyesight.- Bersrkr27dReplied to TheManUnderTheBed
ah fair enough
The stranger tried to bash Thorfinn in the face with his sword but Thorfinn shoulder barged him again and slammed his fist into his stomach, loosening his grip on the blade, however, Thorfinn couldn't avoid the kick the man sent and was sent tumbling into the opposite wall. The man then for some reason went back to Blaeja who was still on the floor watching in shock, he went to kill her again but Thorfinn hooked his arm around his sword arm and twirled him around before throwing him into the wall; he then ducked under a sword strike and cut the man's arm before being punched in the face. The blow dazed him a little and he couldn't avoid the slash of the man's sword as it grazed his stomach. Thorfinn grits his teeth in pain but keeps his head in the fight, he starts slashing his dagger against the man who is able to move back and avoid all the blows; Thorfinn is also able to avoid most of the other man's attacks by using his dagger to deflect the sword. - Bersrkr27dCommented
It's jarring when you switch tense, especially during a fight scene.
The stranger tried to bash Thorfinn in the face with his sword but Thorfinn shoulder barged him again and slammed his fist into his stomach, loosening his grip on the blade, however, Thorfinn couldn't avoid the kick the man sent and was sent tumbling into the opposite wall. The man then for some reason went back to Blaeja who was still on the floor watching in shock, he went to kill her again but Thorfinn hooked his arm around his sword arm and twirled him around before throwing him into the wall; he then ducked under a sword strike and cut the man's arm before being punched in the face. The blow dazed him a little and he couldn't avoid the slash of the man's sword as it grazed his stomach. Thorfinn grits his teeth in pain but keeps his head in the fight, he starts slashing his dagger against the man who is able to move back and avoid all the blows; Thorfinn is also able to avoid most of the other man's attacks by using his dagger to deflect the sword. - Bersrkr1mthCommented
so you've skipped 2.5 years from Pearl Harbour then?
I was then shipped to Britain along with the first brigade of American soldiers that another Colonel was in charge of. However, I had the same rank but only my battalion reported to me. I along with the other Colonel and the British military planned the attack later known as D-day. - Bersrkr1mthCommented
they have forests in the middle east
Opening my eyes, I noticed several things very wrong. First I was definitely not in the middle east as I was currently surrounded by a forest of trees in all directions. Plus it was a very comfortable temperature, almost perfect seventy degrees with little wind going by. Then my senses quickly became overwhelmed as I could smell everything around me and hear what sounded like deer nowhere near my eyesight. - Bersrkr2mthCommented
house blackwood from the riverlands?
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Aspeshaly - especially
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implementations - implication
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no worries
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youngest daughter Arya
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east of westeros
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Because Britain is the only country to have had an empire...
'The magical worlds naming convention is just stupid, or is this something that is just British?! I mean, these people are lunatics anyway. They went around stealing from everyone, and conquering people, all because they wanted spices.' I thought to myself, trying to understand what the fuck is wrong with some people. I seriously hate thinking about other people because they are all so difficult to understand! - Bersrkr2mthCommented
thanks for the chapter
This book has been deleted. - Bersrkr2mthCommented"The gods love you Thorfinn, no other man would be allowed such knowledge, but one god, in particular, will always protect you, feel honoured that you have earned her love," The Seer said to Thorfinn making him confused once again.
- Bersrkr2mthReplied to VXZD_ZD
"Shadow clones usually disperse once they are struck hard enough, but they have been shown capable of enduring injuries for a time." That's what the wiki said. Most fics I've read have them dispel if they take any damage, guess they can take at least a little bit.
The young man's eyes glowed as he observed the mansion while going through the memories he received. A smirk formed on his face as he thought, 'Not bad. Not bad at all! They set up a very good trap. The previous easy missions were indeed to lower my guard. If it was someone careless or arrogant, this trap would have been very successful. Now then…' - Bersrkr2mthReplied to VXZD_ZD
Any damage to a clone dispels it, except for a wood clone.
The young man's eyes glowed as he observed the mansion while going through the memories he received. A smirk formed on his face as he thought, 'Not bad. Not bad at all! They set up a very good trap. The previous easy missions were indeed to lower my guard. If it was someone careless or arrogant, this trap would have been very successful. Now then…' - Bersrkr3mthReplied to machadogbc
what do you think the draft is, no one getting drafted is already a soldier. You get drafted, then as much training as they can give you, then off you go to war. This way they're slightly trained think of it like South Korea with mandatory military service.
"Your first year will consist of a basic curriculum. Reading, writing, history, math, and chakra theory and a few chakra control exercises. Your second year will consist of much the same with an addition of added chakra training. Your third year will start to set you all apart. You'll have required classes and you'll be able to choose electives to take in order to specialize. During this year all girls will be required to take the Kunoichi 101 class as a required course in place of your first elective. Your fourth, and fifth years will be mostly electives with exception of your homeroom class. In your sixth year you will be able to choose between the civilian route, or the shinobi route. Should you choose the civilian route you choose your classes and then graduate and do whatever profession you chose. As for the shinobi route, you all will share all classes as we cover the general information all genin must know. Any questions?" - Bersrkr4mthCommented
Honestly, I don't find it unbelievable that he can tell when someone is lying, after all, he belongs to the night's watch, you probably learn to tell when someone is lying keeping that kind of company.
The rider stared at him for a moment, his expression a blend of suspicion and curiosity. He sighed, his grip on the sword's hilt loosening slightly. "Strangely enough... I don't detect lies in your words," he admitted, though his blade remained aimed at the young man. - Bersrkr4mthCommented
I thought he smashed her head into basically paste?
"Even then, there was not a single moment of time where you deserved my sister… and yet you dared to dishonour her. You dared to take her life… and send her head to me…!"