Uncle_Groudon
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Oof poor eren
Lol author made him the loser and the winner at the same time
Ohh author is adding future events so soon
Author give him the nika fruit. Why? Because having the power of imagination is truly broken. I mean luffy is always a rubber man because he always inagines it, heck even all of his forms came from luffys imagination. I guess its because its been called the rubber fruit for ages now without anyone knowing its a godly devil fruit.
Author your mc talks like steve irwin or ted bear from cyanide and happiness
Ahh the ol’mistake some writers do. Double words in most of a pharagraphs.
7 Dis nuta
Heh oh allen there another 100 more dolla gonna be at your house better prepare than not. The system:
Oh shi that’s actually perfect
Ahh i know what he feels, good ol days when me and my twin brother were littles.
I see that the author still hasn’t fixed how you word every paragraphs. Its not that im complaining, its just that it doesn’t hurt to learn a little. Im not gonna lie but im also not perfect but every time i read, i lose some of my brain cell trying to correct some of the paragraphs and sentence. My brain is multitasking to read and correct everything. And im not insulting your English language but im studying italian even tho i already know 2 languages.
It would be hilarious if those three would be called the hancock sister. Hancock Hancock Hancock Sandersonia Hancock Merigold
I mean he could do the zoan awakening which enhances all the devil fruit to a godly level
it's quite funny to see that none of you all doesn't understand the message behind the chapter 200. author great work and i would like to say that this is a very well written chapter and the message behind it. in all of the fanfic that i have read that other authors made. you were the only one that made a chapter have a message behind it and it was perfectly executed. Well done indeed
Dark water and white water, so MC can make dirty and murky water and Milk or soymilk water
In a literal sense its a sacred gear that is overally useless unless the sacred gear itself can upgrade so the user can change from devil to angel without time limit. Just like people said its the downgrade omnitrix with only 2 race
Basically its a sacred gear that makes you a wizard for the affinity you are more compatible with.
Then answer this: How is she great? How did she obtained that title? When did she obtained it? How was she able to manage zeoticu’s harem without PoD? And many more questions.