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'as she walked out'
"she bit the lower lip of her lips so hard that the metallic taste of her blood was all she could taste on her tongue"
negatively sounds better here instead of "negative way"
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What's wrong with you ? Who taught you English ? Don't you know how to use quotation marks !!??? It's hard following your damn story with how you frequently change how the characters talk with each other. Using this ' marks when a character is saying stuff in their head and this " whether they're saying things out loud to themselves or muttering . God damn it. Y'all ruin stories with stupid clusterfks like these.
whyyyyyy whyyyyyy