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MRgold1

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I'm a guy who's new to writing and has a few idea's for stories and I hope that over time I get better at writing/stories ideas and will be able to get a good community who read my story's .

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  • MRgold1
    MRgold12d
    Replied to Dante_Giordano

    I have an idea of something like them yes

    Ch 163 Devoured by loved ones
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold12d
    Replied to Dante_Giordano

    no it would dissappear but they could be blessed by a god of decay or something similar

    Ch 163 Devoured by loved ones
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  • MRgold1
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    Replied to Cathulhu

    fixed it thanks.

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  • MRgold1
    MRgold116d
    Replied to Drago_20

    yeah, they do get an attack force, but I didn't include that since I'm gonna for a chapter after Jack's is over.

    Ch 159 The other disasters
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold118d
    Replied to Dante_Giordano

    it's a super continent with small island chains surrounding it, and the candidates' distance between each other varies. Some are closer than others. I should probably find a way to make a map of it.

    Ch 157 Blood soaked sand
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold119d
    Replied to Dante_Giordano

    correct, so they are very close. There is another that is close aswell but they will have at least a few biomes in between them. they'll start appearing more in chapters once the tribal stage is over. That's when candidates start battling and scheming.

    Ch 157 Blood soaked sand
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold119d
    Replied to Dante_Giordano

    1. yes, they would be raised if they were killed after the undead appeared, not before. 2. there are multiple native tribes and this is a spoiler, but kingdoms, but I'm keeping those for once. Jack reaches that stage, which will be very soon.

    Ch 157 Blood soaked sand
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold119d
    Replied to Dante_Giordano

    I remember that the sand striders face worms in the first wave, so maybe those pigmen were in another chapter. But they would have been killed by either the rixis or the undead roaming the desert.

    Ch 157 Blood soaked sand
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold130d
    Replied to Ashtarot

    All I can say is that he created them, so some of his personality will be mixed in, and they're all friends, so they'll act similar to one another. I think there's a bit of Jack in each of them, and they reflect differnt parts of himself.

    Ch 155 Moving forward
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  • MRgold1
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    Replied to Dante_Giordano

    yeah, but I guess they're evil because there are those who aren't religious who don't attack those who are. while those seen as evil actively destroy and ruin everything they can.

    Many of these groups were fresh and green, but some vertrans were still kicking around. They managed and guided these groups of youngster down the clean and righteous path and vowed to purge all evil in the lands.
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold11mth
    Replied to VERMITHOR

    New race without any skills or time to evolve and get stronger and is similar to human life spans of the time before modern medicine.

    current lifespan:0-40 max
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold11mth
    Replied to VERMITHOR

    No lizard men, the creator wanted dragons but couldn't make them at the start, so he is doing the next best thing.

    Ch -7 images of the races
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  • MRgold1
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    Replied to king_jayden
    Ch 57 The second day of the wave part 1
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  • MRgold1
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    Replied to Whadyamean

    yeah, I see that aswell but they can have red,white,black,green, and other coloured skins. The only thing I have in my head for them is a mix of human and predator and maybe some lizard men or avatar look.

    The meeting of the greats
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold12mth
    Replied to StormFireReborn

    maybe because they have high levels of strength,speed,durability, long life span,advanced technology, honour,fearlessness, and a high healing factor.

    Ch 4 Skill pool
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  • MRgold1
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    Replied to Ashtarot

    This seems confusing as if I took away what you say makes them one dimensional they'd be even more one-dimensional. The basic traits people have are their nationality and race, along with their gender and religion. Also, you must not be reading correctly as the mc Jack isn't American he's British and if you've read my work so far you would see I've littered around the chapters how Jack is far from a nationalist in fact I made an entire chapter talking about these things. I've also already spoken about how I'm trying my best to focus on Jack while having group chapters on the other characters as they play important roles later on where they will be more involved. As for the other characters, they're not meant to all be saints with no sins, and Jack isn't perfect, constantly doubting himself and his self-worth while also overthinking his actions. I understand my novel won't be for everyone, and some will say it can be done better, but most of what you're saying just doesn't make sense as if If wrote them your way it would just be their likes and dislikes that gets boring quickly. I hope you give it a re-read, but if not, thanks for your time.

    Ch 141 Candidate's progress pt1
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold12mth
    Replied to Dante_Giordano

    perhaps

    Ch 151 A new type of warrior
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold12mth
    Replied to Yggdras1ll

    Nah, it's alright. You have the Jackrixis that are the main race , and each candidate has 2 minor races. For Jack, because he's in an alliance with Nancy, he has control over her race, and in return, if he wins, she doesn't die.

    "I know, but I think the smartest thing to do is get an overall opinion as this will be for my 3 races. Who will lead the charge for the other races that will probably follow them aswell"-Jack
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold12mth
    Replied to Yggdras1ll

    yeah it's only for the game

    In case you forgot a wave happens once every 10 years for 3 days and for every 10 waves, the candidates or their race would get a skill.
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold12mth
    Replied to Dante_Giordano

    hard to say as like your answer we haven't got any massive weakness but you could say the same for aliens. They could be stronger,faster,smarter versions of us, but if I had to choose, probably 4 as in this case its better to underestimate.

    Ch 150 Human reaction
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