From the chapters I’ve read of your story, I can say that it’s entertaining and I really liked it. But if there’s something to point out, it’s that no sentient being in the SCP world referred to them as SCP and they are really anomalies. SCP is the slogan and name of the company / sect / army / etc. They could say that they are anomalies that you could consider SCP to the MC, and he could say I am an SCP anomaly. I still like the story.

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It’s not to discredit your story, I actually like it a lot, but I noticed a few things that feel a bit uncomfortable. The most notable is that the main character seems to have a great dependence on Shapira when facing any problem, and his demeanor when she saves him is more like a child receiving help from his mother. From my personal tastes, it would be better if he showed a bit more emotional maturity when interacting with Shapira.”

I couldn't wait and I read as much as I could from a Chinese page and the translator, it wasn't worth it. I'll wait until you translate it, I can't handle poorly translated Chinese slang xD

You could pass on mtl, or the Chinese name of this novel. Thank you

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Great chapter

Good. Thanks for your story

Moreeeeeee

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¡¡AAAAAAAA!!......¡Fuck YOU...... Good chapter. So far I love your story. I hope you hurt your little toe

¡Ora!.. I like this

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Thanks for chapter

niiice. Great chapter

Incómodo de leer. Adiós

la historia es interesante. pero me parece algo estúpido el mc. como esos mc chinos que quieren vengarse do todo y todos por propio orgullo o envidia. real mente irritante. (mi opinion, no tienes por qué pensar como yo)

que recuerdos. xD

What is the chapter of the first part of this omake?