"Thank God you are here," Ethan said as soon as I walked into the kitchen. I ignored him and walked towards Mr. Gregory who sat on a chair and was enjoying a well-cooked meal. I sat slowly beside him like someone who had a cold.
nice
but
I'm losing interest already, the story is very slow. one can't makeout any meaning from one short chapter. If you can give us regular updates and more chapters, I believe the story will progress faster.
Awesome !!!
I like this story. it's very interesting and entertaining. Good story line and well written. Please give us regular updates, the story is too too too slow.