Personally, I've enjoyed your story enough that I think it'd be worth it. Though you should definitly have a chapter stockpile to make it worth it to readers. Your writing is detailed and engaging enough that the quailty in my opinion is sellable. Obviously keep learning and improving but you've done a good job so far.

I'm a fan of your story, but what's the deal with the grammar being so bad this chapter? There were blatant mistakes nearly every paragraph. I'm not one to hate or anything, as a few mistakes can be ignored and overlooked, but here the mistakes took away from the reading experience.

No, it can be done properly but it's extremely difficult to pull off. So most authors just resort to treating the women as objects without any personalities which takes away from the story immersion.

Picking your fights is not a sign of weakness but wisdom. Even the greatest fighters will at times be outclassed.

The story shows promise but falls short in terms of available content and author incentives. With only two chapters available for review, it is challenging to form a comprehensive opinion on the story's quality and potential. The writing in the two available chapters is average, which is typical for webnovel. However, without further material to evaluate, it is difficult to gauge the overall quality of the author's writing. As a result, any assessment of the story's overall quality remains limited. Unfortunately, the lack of content is primarily due to the author's decision to restrict access to the novel and encourage readers to pay for it. While this is a reasonable approach to monetizing work, the current offering for free readers is meager compared to other webnovels of similar or superior quality. This choice may hinder the novel's potential success, as readers often prefer more substantial content before committing to a payment. Given the limited information available, it would be unfair to provide a definitive rating or judgment of the story. To accurately review and assess the story's merits, a more extensive sample of chapters or a complete work should be made available to readers. This would enable a fair evaluation of the author's writing skills, character development, plot progression, and overall narrative cohesion. In conclusion, while the story exhibits potential in its writing style, the limited amount of available content and the author's incentive structure hinder an accurate assessment. A more substantial free chapter count would provide readers with a better understanding of the story's quality and value.

Definitly just uncaring. As you get older and experience more of life, simple things like what others think of you start to lose their meaning, at least to some degree. Just as you may find a child trying to fight you amusing, a being of his knowledge and experience would likely see the humans in a simmilar light, and might cater to their whims out of curiosity.

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Awesome story so far! Can't wait to read more!!!

Bruh leave your edgyness at home. Author has done a great job at creating a justification for a complex persona. Mc is unique not useless.

I've enjoyed your story. It's well thought out and is enjoyable to read. Sure, there are some parts that are a tad bit confusing but as you said you're still learning and getting better at writing. Your story is already better than a large number of garbage fanfics on this site. Keep up the good work and don't let negative comments drag you down.

As a longtime member of the ANTI-HAREM sect don't let these heathens tempt you with their honeyed words and their false promises.

Bro I love your work and have enjoyed it since it stated but if you do this you will have fallen too far and not that you care but I'll drop it the second you make it that way.

I agree it felt a tad fast paced but I liked the chapter. It could have used some more details to really immerse the reader further to experience the emotions both Poseidon and Jesus felt

Would be dope if you just dont post these updates and only post when the chapter is out. Its getting annoying thinking there's an update and just seeing this........

Its already broken with the unlimited wishes but a system too....... Like I'm trying to have hope for the story but your mc will face no challenges, no development, as you literally gave him everything from the start.

Yuh, you've done a really good job so far so I trust your judgement. Keep up the great work!

No in a universe like the walking dead just the mc having ghost riders powers is already op but him with a squad takes away any threat or danger. Maybe if you added stronger zombies or like some threat to balance it and show your mc struggling it would be better but right now due to how powerful he is (I know it just the beginning but still) the story is starting to feel rather slow and boring.

Imma be honest here, you had a good story but this focus the chapters are having on his harem is taking so much away from the story that I can't keep reading it. I've been reading your story since it began but since the harem has been added it has felt more and more bland and "filler" especially when there's multiple times where half of a chapter is literally just should more girls be added yes? no? he's good? Its just stopped being interesting.

Space Marine height is cool. But I'd base it off the Elite's from the covenant in halo. The average one is 8ft tall and dominate the battlefield. If he's that tall while extremely abnormal is extremely powerful given the sky seed implants. Still sad you went the harem route though. There's too many stories on this site that do that and not enough that build genuine relationships that pull you into the story.

Bruh... why you gotta do this. You had such a good thing going only to ruin it with adding girls and some b.s. "biology excuse" smh............