I was talking about other Fanfiction websites, Sufficent Velocity and Spacebattles are all good forums with creative writing sections that are used for fanfiction.
The grind is something everyone knows of, grind his cloud technique so much that it becomes like a instant teleport you can do short range with no repercussions.
Please just call him Po instead of Poo. Maybe Samehada can be a New World barnacles that absorb peoples stamina and after Jaws beats them in a fight he turns the Barnacles into a sword called Samehada
The thing is that while Umbrella has advanced creations most of them are from the BS flower toxin, they still have the same computers and cameras there are in 1998. Try to use facial recognition on someone using a database from 1998.
I think it’s really dumb that his identity got found out so easily, RE2 was set in 1998. There were not that many cameras in the open that could get a accurate facial recognition.
I have some advice for the author, when you start a sentence make sure to capitalize it. “the house was big.” should instead be “The house was big.” Really liking it.
I’m pretty sure the “imperial father” was the old jade emperor who died and his power went to Huang, she thinks that Huang is going to be her missing father when he just actually only has the powers and no memories.