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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
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    I mean... yes but no

    This proved that Kahn's hypothesis right. He had perfectly covered his tracks. Not even his footmarks were left at the crime scene. So the only way someone as strong as Solomon still having their doubts about it would be sensing the aura of his allies that were hiding in his shadow.
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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
    Commented

    Ohhh his older brother knew afterall

    The hostile man stared at Kahn as he stood like a mighty warrior, ready to pounce at him any moment.
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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
    Commented

    Realistically the organization behind them would know why they left in the first place... but this is a novel afterall :>

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    Hero of Darkness
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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
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    Why is everyone acting like this is all normal though? It's like Elric doesn't deserve any help at all. This sounds like a typical toxic family for me.

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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
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    I love the quality of this novel. It's exactly the type of novel I'm looking to read in my spare time. This novel features an OP MC, a direct progression of the story, and a clear power system. The author's style and pace in his chapters are comforting to read and you can clearly feel that a clear effort of world-building is established in the story, so props for the author for that. My concern through the progression of the story (without spoiling anything) comes with the characters themselves. The MC does not have any philosophy for himself, or in other words, he is the type of every generic cliches that act like the MC empathizes with the weak and is clearly a beta male then in the next chapters the same MC becomes arrogant and thinks every single species are just ants to him. The same could be said to some characters in the story too. All in all, I'd strongly recommend this to readers who want to have a quick read. In the end, face-slapping novels are still satisfying to read.

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    Ace Of Terrans
    Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH
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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
    Commented

    <3

    Ch 1 Mend your wounds
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
    Replied to JennyFerrr

    Love you for the chap too, its great as ever~♡♡

    Ch 1 Red wedding
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
    Replied to JennyFerrr

    You're welcome bae~♡

    Ch 1 Red wedding
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
    Commented

    Keep up the good work!! >:D

    Ch 1 Red wedding
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure1yr
    Commented

    Great chapter as always!!

    Ch 1 I give you my word
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Commented

    Hey! Nice chapter :3

    Ch 1 Undeserving
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Commented

    Nice chap, keep up the good work! :3

    Ch 1 A protective Hades
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Commented

    Nice chapter!! :D

    Ch 1 An embarrassing morning
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Posted

    The premise of the novel starts off simple, a marriage was imposed on the two young adults to settle the long feud between two families. The FL is a doctor and sees light within the darkness, and the ML is the personification of a devil (literally). This is one of the better novels that have a good knack for comedy. The pace is easily understood (in most chapters) and the characters entangle themselves in one huge world. If you are interested in dark humor, this book is for you. To the author, I hope you keep up your work and I wish to see your book through the end. It's alright to take your time in creating your chapters. Keep it up and Ciao!

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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Replied to Contoure

    ... the more she feels disengaged from the ML. A moral person would most likely feel guilty when they associate themselves with people who are not morally sound. But keep it up, author!

    Ch 8 I have my ways
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Commented

    So... the FL is being burdened by the death of her lover 5 years ago because of her grandfather and the ML agrees on a loveless marriage while the catch is he is unscrupulous in his means, and can even resort to extreme measures. It sparks an interesting moral conflict between the two main characters. Lilliana represents light with a shade of darkness from her trauma (or maybe more), and Vincenzo symbolizes complete darkness. I am expecting more from Lilliana because having her lover killed is a traumatic experience. It's hard to visualize how she and the ML can get along with each other when some qualities she abhorred from her trauma (an act of killing) were also done by the ML (In chapter 2). In short, the longer she would know Vincenzo, the more she would feel detached about him.

    Ch 8 I have my ways
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    The Alliance
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Commented

    grant*

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    The Alliance
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Commented

    Ethan was the FL's ex??

    "It wasn't your fault that he's dead. Move on with some other man. It's been eight years, for fuck's sake. Ethan would want that too."
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Commented

    Same energy.

    "Saw it, took it." Rosalina shrugged. She had filled the pipe with tobacco earlier but didn't light the thing. She just cleaned it and blew it a few times until the air flows freely.
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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  • Contoure
    Contoure2yr
    Commented

    The beginning is up to a great start, and I also like where this is going. Keep it up!

    Ch 3 A ruthless patriarch
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    The Alliance
    Urban · JennyFerrr
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