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flying_dagger2yrCommentedIt is implied many times that Ying was more beautiful than Xi Shi! Then she must be very beautiful!
Mister Yao shook his head and said, "She's a special immortal. You only see her with her dark skin and shabby appearance. But I can tell you; she's the most beautiful girl I've seen in more than a thousand years. We only allow her to marry a mortal man if the man is a king!"- flying_dagger2yrCommented
lol...what a description!
"Oh!" Xuanye gazed at the girl who was busy eating her food. She was holding a big chunk of pork leg with her right hand while she's sipping her wine with her left hand. - flying_dagger2yrCommentedCh 40 Two Immortals, Two Masters
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AWWWWW.....this scene...this could be a passionate romantic scene! The author should elaborate more on it :D :D
A heartbroken lonely man, and a widow who missed her late husband. Under the rain, they just forgot everything under the spell of the moon and breeze. - flying_dagger2yrCommented
I guess she had a communication problem that's why she seldom speaks, and only talks in short sentences!
Ying said, "I come from a poor family. Often, I didn't have enough food. And in winter, I could not afford warm shoes and my feet often freeze. I only have one friend, and she's a good girl. But her husband abused her, and now her leg becomes crippled because of him. I want to help and support people like her! I also saw, how rich people lend out of money to the poor people then take away poor children and girls to be sold to market slaves and brothels. That's why I want to be an official like Minister Fan." She looked at Madame Ling. "I want to make poor people have enough food to eat, and warm clothing and shoes in winter!" - flying_dagger3yrPosted
I am not an English native speaker, therefore I have no comment on the writing quality (grammar, etc.) but as long as I can understand, I have no problem with it. The story development, character design, and world background are awesome. I could tell the author is doing serious research on his/her writing. I hope the author will elaborate more on the male characters. There are too many female leads anyway...I want to see more male leads instead of female leads.