I am not an English native speaker, therefore I have no comment on the writing quality (grammar, etc.) but as long as I can understand, I have no problem with it. The story development, character design, and world background are awesome. I could tell the author is doing serious research on his/her writing. I hope the author will elaborate more on the male characters. There are too many female leads anyway...I want to see more male leads instead of female leads.
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