r u think of adding gun gail online the people in shield would go crazy in the storyline

u can look up light novel which is so much better than the animation try reading some of them

My man I get u want hype yourself up and all but the a differents between hyping a novel and trolling with someone you’re just a troll I try to give befits of the doubt but this is too much now u had somewhat a story but now it you r just making fool of us so I’ m out good luck with everything

Dude the story look cool but pls stop trolling us the notifications r great and all but come in stop trolling with the notifications ok

I think a good world may be god of high school or Return Of The Disaster-Class Hero

Yes please continue

He can save her in the Chunin Exams instead of Sasuke and remember medical ninja which can help him in the long run

Go with Karin Uzumaki I feel that she The best choice for him

Got one to from a another manga it call cut and paste cut Any power or ability and paste to yourself or anyone or anything think about it

U did man keep it up[img=recommend]

R u putting box weapons too and U should give the night’s flame too the teleport power should come in handy in the future for him

It not a bad story I like it just feels like it’ s missing something please don’t give up keep working on it I will keep reading it good luck

R u goi ng to put the 9 flame the night flame and the flames of the earth give him the sand flame that be cool from the manga and introduced the ring s as well