Semyasa
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Semyasa3yrCommentedright... so drama incoming confirmed
All he needed was just another push, and all the young master/mistress drama would become a relic of the past.- Semyasa3yrCommented
Oh boy, Lith is in trouble now
"And what about you, ugly b*tch? Why are you not laughing anymore? Why don't you go cry to your mommy, Duchess Baran? I want to see her face when I rip your heart out in front of her eyes and make her eat it raw as an apology for being weaker than me!" - Semyasa3yrCommented
I think we've gotten the point by now author... Stop beating the same old horse again and again.
Roland was not involved in the game industry, but he had played a lot of games, including Pac-Man at the beginning and the exquisite VR games right now. Even though the games today could make NPCs look vivid, they still lacked the critical essence, which was the soul! - Semyasa3yrPosted
from the 70-ish chapters I've read, the story is alright. The characters are ok, with only one of them being remotely interesting. the writing is slightly sub-par, as I seem to find mistakes in almost every single chapter... There is a definite need for a proof-reader. As for the world's background, the general Idea is there, but I feel it is too ambitious for the level of the author's writing. What attracts most readers I believe is the simply the concept of the story, and with the story being ok, it looks like a recipe for succes.