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SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to VividSilverWolf- SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to Zeus_Lawliet
not exactly. what GOLDEN RULE do is perfect what you have. in the case of Gilgamesh he was a collector so the perfect form of collector is collecting heaven defying tresors. This is just an example of how broken Golden Rule is as a skill
[Golden rule] - SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to HDvt
actually simple the perfection of luck became luck EX .one point also,hving LUCK EX is not alwas good
Bell worked hard to restore his breathing so that his body could in battel ready stat as soon as possible. The hand that slowly held the Goblin Dagger no longer continued to tremble with excitement. Breathing no longer continues to be rapid. The first thing you need to pay attention to survive in the wild is your physical strength. The same is true in the dungeon, where stamina and energy are the first things to keep an eye for. If you can't measure the upper limit of your physical strength, then you can easily fall into an ambush of monsters and die easily. Soon four to five goblins were hiding in the nearby darkness, a dark corner that could hardly be seen by the human eye. Fortunately for Bell he was accustomed to the darkness, and his eyes could already see his target in the darkness. This also allowed Bell to officially see what a goblin looked like. The body is dark green, a slender body and a little sharp ear, but the expression on the face is unusually vicious. They hands hold a slightly curved short knife. A frightening cold light can be seen at the edge of the blade, telling its danger to all how see it. - SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to Zeus_Lawliet
in the Type Moon wiki Golden Rule mean perfection in body and wealth but not luck
[Maybe it's only luck.] - SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to Nepu_Nep
Actually by remake i mean changing possibly everything while keeping the core values of the story for example i did keep bell in Hestia familia but bell itself changed (more Magus like than the airhead Hero in the original work and more darker than the original fanfiction ) i did similar things to skill a code of conduct just as exemple i plan to change more things as the story progress hopefully for the better to the audience.
- SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to Daoist9177NN
i switched the name of some skills to be more in line with Fate TYPE MOON
[Imperial Privilege]. - SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to HDvt
golden rule in type moon refer to fortune not just gold but also perfection and luck
Bell worked hard to restore his breathing so that his body could in battel ready stat as soon as possible. The hand that slowly held the Goblin Dagger no longer continued to tremble with excitement. Breathing no longer continues to be rapid. The first thing you need to pay attention to survive in the wild is your physical strength. The same is true in the dungeon, where stamina and energy are the first things to keep an eye for. If you can't measure the upper limit of your physical strength, then you can easily fall into an ambush of monsters and die easily. Soon four to five goblins were hiding in the nearby darkness, a dark corner that could hardly be seen by the human eye. Fortunately for Bell he was accustomed to the darkness, and his eyes could already see his target in the darkness. This also allowed Bell to officially see what a goblin looked like. The body is dark green, a slender body and a little sharp ear, but the expression on the face is unusually vicious. They hands hold a slightly curved short knife. A frightening cold light can be seen at the edge of the blade, telling its danger to all how see it. - SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to aiden_rivera
it would be difficult cause you have to understand that the only way to get to Loki familia is by having a rare if not unique skill or ability also it's one of the 2 king on orario so it end with only small choices Hestia on first place on any low familia i don't think I need to explain why Freya is not an option
[Good! I guess i have to for the "Hestia clan".] - SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrCommented
To Rise the anticipation of the readers here's a little tip the skill i plan to use are the most Nerfed skill in the Type Moon universe but i will use then in they full power only a hardcore fan of the Narsuverse will be able to understand what I did and probably Most of them will call my Version of BELL broken or OP so stay tuned.
Ch 10 CHAPTER 09 - SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to ThreshGasmCh 1 IMPORTANT
- SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to neis_markoCh 2 CHAPTER 01
- SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrReplied to Abyssal_Ram123
- SCARLETToFBoCOTHER1yrPosted
hi i will first say good job for the story. Now for the review here are the point i did find : - you story is the closest one to the real development of the series in term of Riser act before the start of the actual novel (it was noted on the novel that Riser is caracter and the reason of marriage was forced by the rias father ). -the fact that you implemented the sword used in different anime give a much refreshing change than what the real author of high school DXD didn't want to challenge (causes most of the gear are imagination driven Wich mean unlimited possiblity ). -The choice of the MC was on point (i mean Let's be honest it was a forgotten character until the Excalibur Arc). now for what i find negative : - Some writing error (not much of a problem most reader skip them without thinking . -Most chapter are Short ranging from the 900 to 2000 word - Possibly all chapter End by a cliff hanger Wich can be bad some time (depend on the reader most of the time . - the possibility of story development change (the remove of Kiba from the picture early). - The need to change from original time line(while not much the role played by Kiba in the 2 to 3 Arc was important). at the End it's a good story still I'm very interested to know you will develope the story further cause you took out an important piece from the beginning
- SCARLETToFBoCOTHER2yrCommentedCh 39 Working on Car and Things Happening in Kuoh (R-18)
- SCARLETToFBoCOTHER2yrCommented
ulbert ,Ulric ,undine ,....
This chapter has been deleted. - SCARLETToFBoCOTHER2yrCommentedCh 26 CHAPTER 25