That's a weird timeline. Maki, Pakura's student, is about a few years younger than Kakashi.
raw: 拯救宇智波, 从掀桌子开始Having people going to your YouTube channel for chapters is a weird choice man. It's a decent translation but a weird way to promote yourself. Even the greedy Chinese sites give 50-60 chapters for free.
*you're too nervous
*I am grateful for being alive!
*you would have been a great ninja.
Never start a sentence with "and".
Needs capitalization and structure to the paragraph.
*fully fledged ninja.
It has promise, but please get an editor or use some editing software.The layout is atrocious and difficult to read. There are many options out there to help you polish your work up a bit. Maybe even try chatGPT to fine tune your work. There is no shame in using AI to do that. Especially if you tell it to properly format your work in novel form. I had to actually force myself to keep reading because of how bad you have the speech arranged.
She is the goddess of youth/prime of life. She was also the cupbearer for the gods and goddesses of Mount Olympus, serving nectar and ambrosia. Also known as the goddess of forgiveness and/or mercy.
I went in knowing nothing about the game and was interested enough to dive deep into the rabbit hole that is Rain World.What a crazy concept for a game. Not to mention the insane amount of information available in the communities. I ended up watching a two hour documentary about the games fauna and flora... I haven't even played it and I already know so much. Crazy.This novel is worth a try, the game it is based on is so huge and the author seems invested in writing about it. Excellent potential.
Inadvertently insulting her goddess.
Your pacing plus long chapters makes a great combination that is very satisfying. Keep it up.