See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Hey. logan. if you still read review here, i want to let you know youve done an amazing job. i saw one of the earlier reviews say this book is the beat on this app. FranKly, i’m inclined to agree. I’ve gotta ask though, what happened? Why did you stop? You made a promise to finish the story of reborn: evolving from nothing. I’m not saying keep true to the promise, i just want to know, What happened? And if you’re finishing up the story somewhere else, where? Hope you’re doing alright man. healthwise, financially, And in life generally. really hope to hear from you. and thanks again for an amzing story

Dear author, your book is awesome. But please remember to stick to one writing point of view. Either the first person as seen by alex or third person as seen by you the author. Also, please dedicate some time to edit previous chapters. Thanks for the book

Cliché? @Alphawolf? What? Noooo

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I’ll say this is looking to be a very interesting book. plus the grammar is good and typographical errors are pretty much null. altogether, I’d say very well done author. Criticism: i’ve noticed theres a bit of inconsistency with ed’s health. Just be more consistent with the minor details.