Why is it called "My Demigod System" if there isn't a system. Change it. You're misleading readers and just posting stuff that happened in the book word for word. If you aren't gonna change it don't post it fool.

Let others see this comment and do not delete it. I have only spoken the truth. This book had potential. For being a supposed host of Zeus, he is weakened so that the author can add drama that is simply unnecessary. He is shown the memories of Zeus and the consequences of what would happen if he were to be weak is laid bare, and yet he chooses to be a good student? He is a coward that didn't stop to think that his mother may be in danger if he doesn't stop being pathetic. The author turned this from gold into garbage. I am saddened that such an incredible concept is wasted by a fool. Let others see this comment and do not delete it. I have only spoken truth.

This is pathetic. For being the supposed host of Zeus, he is straight up garbage. You clearly weakened him just to add drama. It's a sad display. No one in their right mind would act the way Jack is acting, especially since his mother might be put in danger if he doesn't start waking up. He was shown the memories of Zeus and instead of acting upon that information and becoming stronger, because you made him pathetic, he chooses to be a good student? He was warned that some monsters will ignore the power of the pendant and he chooses to go to a crowded area like school? You had a template for something incredible, and yet you have turned gold into trash. Be proud of yourself for it takes a certain type of fool to do what you just did. It started off with potential and you messed it up. Great job. Dropped.

I wanted to write a massive paragraph complaining on your lack of storytelling skills, and planning. However, I won't. This is a pathetic attempt. Be better, that is all.

Wow... This chapter was just disappointing. Did you really have no other ideas to spice up your story? Was it really that hard to come up with something else to advance the plot? Pathetic. Be better.

So he's just talk. Your MC is literally bending over backwards for Charles and Cyclops. He's threatened them 4 or 5 times and not once has he gone through with it. You should've made him leave by the second time Charles read his mind. You make it sound like his willpower is staying his hand, but we all know it's simply because you've no clue on how to progress the plot without forced interactions. The MC prioritises his daughter. The MC choosing to keep his daughter in a mansion together with a potential world ender was simply you forcing a plot. The character you've written until that point would definitely not have chosen that option. He knows his limits at a given point of time and makes sure that he can handle the variables, like his escape from the Hydra base. Be better.

See, his shift into this "calculative" individual feels downright sad. Not because he had to lose two parents to get there, no. But because you really had no other method of creating a better MC. Pathetic. Be better.

Wow. You handled that poorly. Such a forced event. We aren't connected to the parents at all, making their deaths meaningless. All it shows is your lack of vision and planning because, like others have stated, we saw this coming from a mile away. I liked the MC. He isn't proactive enough with his abilities but that's alright. He was still adapting to the changes. However, that isn't an excuse for him to have basically zero awareness to the threats on his life as well as his family's when he literally battled with a silver ranked assassin. You'd think that maybe where he is isn't the safest place to be, or that maybe he isn't even comparable to a baby when combating hegemons and should have taken actions to at least keep his family safe. But no. You made him content with waiting it out. It's your choice if you want your character to be a dimwit, but don't insult our intelligence by dragging it down to yours.

Disappointing. I really liked the start of this novel. Then you went and mucked it up. Why does every author want to reveal the secrets of a reincarnated person? If you don't have the necessary creativity and story planning, then you can either ask for assistance, go back to the source material (Marvel and DC in this case), or drop the story. If you don't have the necessary tools then don't start sculpting. It'll only show how unprepared you are.

Hais. Another author who downplays superman's powers just so he can create hardships for him. No it wasn't a good job. If it was truly a serious punch Superman could destroy moons. If he put his all into it he could shatter a planet. The hulk is strong yes but he would've eventually been torn down. Be better.

It's sad. Your attempt at creating a character who grows as he experiences new scenarios and hardships is clearly not working. You've created a character that has no business being the lead. The fact that he gets beaten up by trash doesn't show restraint. It shows a lack of common sense and exposes your own desire to be humiliated. All he needs to do is show some force within human limits and immediately you'll have more options to work with in terms of building a character as well as giving your readers a reason to stay engaged. It all starts with the foundation and you mucked it up. Truly, I am embarrassed for you. You ruined what could have been a thoroughly captivating story and exposed your own fetish of being humiliated. Better luck next time.