See normally I would agree given the HP setting, but his personality is fine. It was already stated that Hogwarts isn’t a school, it’s more akin to a military institution where they are training future soldiers. An instructor told a group of trainee’s to “follow his orders”…kinda normal no? They need to get used to following orders and becoming more disciplined.

I mean let’s be honest, they could have been a lot worse. Nothing in overlord is black and white

Read this on night mode lol

betting on Kira

Some may say… “It ain’t that deep bro…It’s just soccer bro…”

It’s kinda funny when you realize he became this revenge crazed psycho because his brother didn’t want to play a certain position anymore lol Like dude just realized Japan had a weaker team than the rest of the world and became a midfielder, which made his brother despise him because only strikers matter!

Maybe?

We have instincts ingrained in our subconscious mind even if we don’t notice them. When you’re walking and you see a red light in front of you, chances are you stop moving thinking it’s a stop light or something? BOOM dead from an explosive tag. She is thrown towards a body of water? Uh oh better get ready to swim! Wait? She could have just walked on it!! Man how stupid…ect. For humans in modern day society our base instincts have taken on a mold to fit our environment. ‘Danger’ to us may be missing a deadline at work, or running low on money. Thus our mind tricks our body into believing there is a ‘threat’. Shinobi, even though they have the same base instincts as we are both humans, have a different mold shaped by their environment. To them ‘danger’ could be a jutsu or a shuriken flying at them.

Oh nvm thought it said he was a bolder that rolled him off xD

All about that late game team setup. He’s playing a completely different game than the rest of them. He’s obviously not taking Rin when he beats them and the other two don’t fit his style so prob will snipe Bachi in the 4v4. Nagi might convince Kira to take Reo but King is prob best even with the personality clash. Reo imo is more toxic than King. That’s 5 which means they pass. Tho to be fair, he might not even play them. Things might play out like in cannon for Isagi with Kira facing the other teams. Might take Shido or someone else as his 4th 5th

Last couple chapters had a really good length, I understand the actual matches can but harder to write but there isn’t really much suspense at the current stage. Which isn’t your fault Author, it’s pretty natural that Kira would dominate matches. In which case I think longer more detail oriented chapters are better than the reactionary suspense type which a lot of the previous matches had. The way you were writing was actually really good for matches like maybe the next arc the third selection arc where tbh I don’t think Kira is strong enough to win. I think he will surprise them but I think those chapters are good to build that suspense and character growth. Even if you need to take longer to write this current arc I do think longer chaps with more details would be better, however, write however is easiest and most enjoyable to you. Just some minor advice as a reader :)

I imagine the skills not only improve based on his proficiency lvl but also his experience using them and his own base physical fitness right? Would be nice to have that shown somehow during these upcoming matches. 10 days of intense physical training should have helped his foundations some more. So maybe him being even faster or able to use his skills more often due to his body adapting to them? Obviously him learning new combos with his skills is nice as well. Like maybe him using swarm and rice spirit to mimic Nagi?

Yeah def got the names mixed up 😂

Yeah she’s a good girlfriend tbh. She is talking about herself and her team winning their basketball game, and Kira winning his match. If you play basketball or just sports in general your coach/trainer has just as much sway in a match’s outcome as the players. It’s never “the players” it’s the team/organization as a whole. So if the basketball team wins she played a part in that outcome, so it’s her victory too. Tho I also like how it kinda seems like she is already seeing herself as Kira’s girlfriend. “We” rather than “him and I” they are a team in their relationship and they each are trying to lead their teams towards victory. Kinda cute no?