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AJTP

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2018-09-15 JoinedGlobal
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  • AJTP
    AJTP1yr
    Posted

    fun premise but the guy only makes sabers for 80+ chapters. You make a story interesting by including special weapons. The guy makes slightly different sabers for 80 chapters

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    Legendary Armament Canon
    Eastern · Lays Chips
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    Cannot even be bothered to proofread a synopsis lol. This is so bad and its getting sad, when something gets too stupid and ridiculous it's not even funny anymore

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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    Sounds like the same cringe trash that I have seen a dozen times, some people like the boring and predictable but please add something good for once.

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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    This novel feels ripped of another. Main character with weak stats, main character with special identification skill, main character forms a team with a big guy to survive the "tutorial", main character meets super strong crazy female, main character meets a regreszor and decides to team up with him, those points are from another novel. Read this one and tell me if the point I alluded to above are real.

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    New Reality
    Fantasy · Ordki_Hozei
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months

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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Replied to Tomiwa_Banjo_3789

    the raw is extremely different and way worse

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    I Want You to Create a Handgun but You Give Me a Mechanical Armor Instead
    Urban · Floating Phantom
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    It's better than the average trial read novel by a lot. The world is interesting, the writing quality is good. Feels so weird to have a good novel in trial read. This category has been plagued by brain-dead stories and tropes and the first 20 chapters of this one looks good. I hope this keeps going and this review doesn't end up looking trollish.

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    I Want You to Create a Handgun but You Give Me a Mechanical Armor Instead
    Urban · Floating Phantom
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    Author here! I have just started and am open to to criticism and advice, so if you have any please share. I am not a 100 percent sure where I will take this novel so if you have suggestions don't hesitate

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    Second chance at Conquest
    Games · AJTP
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Replied to JoSauer

    Have you tried reincarnation of the strongest sword god ?

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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Commented

    the time before christ, the time before slavery.... you gotta love those novels

    Instead, they regressed to the time before Christ, to the time of slavery. They might even be said to have returned to the time of primitive societies that was far older than the era of slavery and wherehumans still acted like savages. 
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    Oh My God! Earthlings are Insane!
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Commented

    Tiananmen square ?

    Because this country always made the right decision, even against the odds.
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    The Whole World Fell into an Era of Beasts
    Eastern · Lao Xu 01
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    Probably the best trial read novel in a while, it is still a power fantasy but executed with more than two braincells. The novel seems pretty fun, it is not insane but by opposition to the rest of the trial read novels it might as well have been written by Shakespeare.

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    Starting Out As A Goblin Summoner
    Urban · Laugh and Joy
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Commented

    laser short range missile defences are not actually great, hypersonic missiles go so fast that they are enveloped by a thin barrier of superheated plasma. This barrier messes with radar tech not allowing for a clean lock and making precise lasers less efficient than the current anti missile batteries using miniguns.

    Ch 60 If Raymond Finds Out About This One Day, Things Will Get Interesting!
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    The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World
    Urban · Two Langya Brothers
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    The fact that the story doesn't start with the MC winning the lottery is what's kept me going past the first chapter. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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    Global Descent into the Crypt World: A Divine-Level Decomposer
    Eastern · Fire Hole
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Commented

    displacement ? shouldn't it be movement ? A displacement usually refers to moving the enemy like a knockback effect for example

    The other two were Mages skills. Blink, a common displacement skill for Mages; Fire Blast, an instant burst skill for Fire Elemental Mages.
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    Destiny Online: Halo Paladin
    Games · Dark Crow's Starry Whisper
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    Chill story, the MC has a personality. A solid vrmmorpg novel. Rarararararrarararrarararararararrararararartataraaarrararararrarrarararararr

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    Destiny Online: Halo Paladin
    Games · Dark Crow's Starry Whisper
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    Best original novel on this website, a slow burn but there is world building ! Yes, I know, world building, this rare quality 99% of this website's novels can't get even close to right. Up there with RSSG and the legendary mechanic. I might place it higher as the story has so much room for more. This novel is worth it, if you can only read one, I would force you to read this one. Point and case.

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • AJTP
    AJTP2yr
    Posted

    The descriptions for the techniques are the best thing this story has, the characters are okay, the world building is nonexistent like in most wuxia/system novels. Better than most, the MC is not completely op which I like, he bleeds at least. To sum it up this is a better than average trial read novel and might feel decent to read compared to the rest.

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    Binding to Geniuses To Become Stronger
    Eastern · Li Hongtian
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  • AJTP
    AJTP3yr
    Posted

    A boring novel, nothing interesting, character is bland, no world building. Nothing except haha funny MC cool and idiot stupid. Written by a twelve year old

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    The Magical Blacksmith
    Eastern · Time Seaweed
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  • AJTP
    AJTP3yr
    Posted

    The best novel with video game elements out there. The world is well made, the magic feels great. This novel is simply great in every aspect. A very strong recomend.

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    Mages Are Too OP
    Games · Soaring Flames
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