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PatriarchReader1yrPostedA big disappointment for a novel. It starts well, but soon the author starts to contradict himself, complains about the heroes who never kill the villains and arrest them so they can run away and kill/rape again. But when the main character has a chance to make a difference he does the same thing, at first when he was weak he gave the excuse of not wanting to be chased by batman, but when he gets strong he starts coming up with a bunch of lame excuses. Even when he has a bounty on his head and every bandit and mercenary comes after his life, he decides to 'send a message' that no one should do this to him, so what does he do? he beats them and arrests them, so they can go out and continue killing/raping in 1 week when they escape from prison. The author himself demonstrates this when the person who placed the bounty regains consciousness the first thing he says is "Now listen here, you—". Doesn't look like the foolproof plan to beat up the bad guys worked to 'send a message', does it? It makes no sense how anyone wastes time writing or reading this after realizing it. It's just another fanfic with a character that doesn't add anything to the original DC story. He has no desires, he doesn't have a goal he wants to fulfill in the world, he simply exists as a throwaway character, why the hell should I care about this character when he doesn't do anything or wants anything, I should read on just to see him increase his stats for doing nothing and see how strong he gets? 1 star for wasting time reading until the part where the author says how useless the character would be.
- PatriarchReader1yrCommented"They have adopted even faster. We have discovered that they are quite talented in the Aura Master department compared to humans–focusing more on speed and dexterity. However, their magical talent is subpar compared to humans."
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hey author, for this sentence to make sense "release something that could shake the history of Hollywood" he should have made Breaking Bad, Game of Thrones or The Office, they are series that even those who have never seen them know how good they are ( I myself have never seen Game of Thrones but I know the whole story just from so many posts that so many people made on the internet). I even hope to read about them in the future even if you do like that other fanfic that the mc started putting other people to direct his films. PS. your story is better than his, loving it so far
Thinking about the response which was somewhat late from Eloise, Ian sat near his computer and started continuing the next script he has been working on. It was a series called, "Lucifer". He was going to create a series because he wanted to get it into OTT (over the top) platforms and the series market. Since those types of things were much more popular these days, he wanted to release something that could shake the history of Hollywood. - PatriarchReader1yrCommented
Will he find this guy?
For the most part, he was curious about what kind of a person Ryan Gosling might be. And then, he kept thinking about the other actors and ideas for his next big projects. - PatriarchReader1yrCommentedElly thus quickly made her way to the top of the main mast, hanging the flag and causing us all to cheer. "Now we only need to receive our payment from that yellow turd, beat the crap out of him, and do one last thing on Kano country before making our way to reverse mountain," I exclaimed while watching my Jolly Roger flap in the air with a smirk.
- PatriarchReader1yrCommentedThe increase in mana in the environment has granted some individuals special powers or gifts. Based on the data gathered, these abilities varied from elemental control, teleportation, and many other magical abilities.
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- PatriarchReader1yrCommentedBut he never thought that the latter was hiding deep under the sea. This was an oversight on his part. Truth be told, it was not totally his fault; it was mainly because he was scarred from the first time he tried to explore the deep sea.
- PatriarchReader1yrCommentedyou all can look forward for tomorrow. I have prepared a little gift for you.
- PatriarchReader1yrCommentedCh 312 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 312
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Edward in every world he goes:
After that, he returned to his occupation as a thief, stealing knowledge from witches and warlocks of this world. At some point, Edward realized that he might have developed a bad habit of stealing books. - PatriarchReader1yrCommentedFinally, Edward will be able to communicate with Rowena and Luna much easier. Of course, what he's most excited about is Interdimensional Capable. Just like in Rick and Morty, he will connect his television to capable across the multiverse so that he watches shows from different realities.
- PatriarchReader2yrReplied to Lukas_dark"As you wish, boss," said the little purple-haired elf. The A.I. of the library was exactly like her, a magical artificial intelligence. So, she quickly launched a confrontation, and in just a few seconds, she was the winner,
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After this arc Edward will be ready for One Piece
This rock should have pierced their bodies, killing or at least severely injuring them, but they went through them instead. - PatriarchReader2yrCommentedCh 221 Frank
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it's some reincarnation of the protagonist of accel world? lol
His chubby stomach was jiggling as he walked over to the mirror and glanced at his height, which is less than 121 centimeters. - PatriarchReader2yrCommented
where is John Wick's weapon?
This paragraph has been deleted. - PatriarchReader2yrReplied to Des_HadeAll the people in the solar system stood up, place their right hand on their shoulder and their left hand on their back, and repeated:
- PatriarchReader2yrCommentedHowever, he was not discouraged. Instead, he wanted to study this system to see if he could recreate the Heroic Spirits from the Fate Universe. It's a shame that he had not succeeded as of now.