seriously loved the idea, you don't get to see many dune fanfic... And the concept of being paul's twin instead of a soul taking the place of paul is beautifully actualised, and that set this novel as a standout from others. My advice is for you not to be carried away with harems and the usual cliche of other fan fic.... In All... BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN( on the way to being a masterpiece).

@shadow_D_monarch... adding too many harem members spoils the story and it has ruined so many good ones, so be careful

tftc

I don't care about this book to be honest... I just want to know when your wrestling book is going to be updated

nice chapter ... but it's giving a déjà vu feeling to me like I've read a novel with similar plot lines where he gives the info to the military and asked to take part in the fight to prevent it from becoming a war boss

are you putting us on hiatus ??!!

this novel is much more better and fleshed out than any Greek gods novel out there bar a few.... but this question is for @extra 27... is this novel on hiatus ????

dope chapter .. where's the link

This chapter especially has too much similarities with outside of time

can you pls release more chapters[img=beg][img=crying]

can we get a mass release

are you on haitus or what?

are you on haitus or what

haih... chapters release more... me want more

more chapters... too slow

really love this book.... kinda in a relapse without it cos am trying to stop so it's helpful to me... really really love it... pls continue and bring more chapters. It's like my dose to cool my mind

seriously love this novel... stay strong