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I am lazy and can't describe how much, thanks you.

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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op3d
    Replied to tjaredjesthebestbf

    Root was present during 2nd War as danzo formed it in a younger age and the second war we see how old he was when he sold the original Akatsuki to Hanzo

    'It's lucky that I haven't been killed by or taken by Danzo in his ROOT.'
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op3d
    Commented

    All the jokes landed for me, the Improvement you should after the rewrite were massive and can't help but look up to that level of dedication.

    Ch 64 Chapter no.64 So What?
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op3d
    Replied to Adamo_Amet

    Thanks bro, didn't know you were good at motivating as well, thank you for this I working to make something that can resonate with people that like the idea that I am working with, good luck on your journey as well

    "Thank you..." Naruto paused, and Hiruzen wasn't expecting much, but his heart fluttered when he heard Naruto say it after a pregnant pause, "Jiji."
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op3d
    Replied to Lone_Philosopher

    He was banished from konoha so he must be living somewhere under 'surveillance' right?

    To everyone who is wondering why Hiruzen didn't kill Danzo, that's the thing. Hiruzen doesn't know it's Danzo. From Hiruzen's POV, Danzo is enjoying his banishment in the Shaolin temple.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op3d
    Replied to Adamo_Amet

    Author.... You didn't just do the homework you prepared for the final exam... You are indeed cooking and I wish I was as half as good as you were honestly I want to write but looking at your improvements and watching how other authors write I don't really feel confident, although I am currently educating myself in literature to become a good author since I am writing a Naruto fanfic myself

    "Thank you..." Naruto paused, and Hiruzen wasn't expecting much, but his heart fluttered when he heard Naruto say it after a pregnant pause, "Jiji."
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op3d
    Replied to Adamo_Amet

    I have read some and it seems ridiculous to me

    You know, I never understood why there was a trope of Evil Hiruzen in so many fanfics until I started writing this fanfic and trying to make Hiruzen consistent with how the original series portrayed him. The old leader of the village made mistakes but was willing to put his life on the line.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op3d
    Commented

    This was an amazing development author

    And yes, the 3-tail giant turtle was Isobu, the 3 tails, meaning before Rin was made into the 3-tails Jinchuriki, Kushina battled the 3-tail Jinchuriki in their biju form. Kushina crucified the biju with her chakra chains.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op3d
    Commented

    It was very endearing to say the least

    3- Mr. Higurashi is my OC, but I hope you all like how he stood up for Naruto, which made sense since Naruto worked for the guy for a week and even helped his daughter achieve her dream and paid back 50k worth of debt.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op4d
    Replied to Adamo_Amet

    Also didn't danzo have the weaker version of Kotoamatsukami, one which doesn't need eye contact but once revealed that it's being cast it would dissipate or something can't remember properly, did you change it on purpose?

    "My interests are Konoha's interests," Danzo declared, the Sharingan in his eye beginning to spin and change as Danzo reinforced Kotoamateukami on Dragon.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op4d
    Replied to Adamo_Amet

    Bro this looks so cool where can I buy this? 😂

    From the gaping mouth of the floating Naruto head, a muscular humanoid rubber chicken emerged.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op5d
    Replied to Natural_SSR

    That's what I am waiting for, in fact, I can't even explain how much I want that to happen

    What do you guys think Neji is going to do?
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op5d
    Commented

    The plot is actually going extremely smoothly in my opinion the rewrite is amazing

    Ch 47 Chapter no.47 Splitting the Grain
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op5d
    Commented
    Iruka is going to stay in the story as he uncovers who ordered the sabotage of Naruto and the other children. (Guess in the comments, but the answer is obvious.)
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op5d
    Commented

    Explosion heart release, lol this was a martial arts bang used when he was young in one punch man

    So, this author note is to ask you all what should be the name of Naruto's application of chakra control where he just blasts chakra out of his body and mimics Tsunade's strength.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op6d
    Replied to Adamo_Amet

    Lol that is amazing

    His voice trailed off when he noticed Sasuke knocked out, face first on the asphalt, his limbs awkwardly bent beneath him.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op6d
    Replied to Adamo_Amet

    Yea it would be awesome to see hinata being that strong since I haven't seen anyone write her to make her strong

    Hinata can channel wind chakra into the Neko Te, and the moment she lands a hit on someone, the enemy won't have their chakra shut down, no, the enemy would have a finger-sized hole inside their body. Somehow, if they can survive, that enemy will never be able to use chakra again because Hinata literally punched a hole into their chakra network.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op6d
    Commented

    I remember a manhwa called the Skeleton Soldier or something and in that manhwa there was a character called lady Duke don't remember the actual name but he was very strong and used the same weapon to produce the same effect you spoke of, I think it's a Google idea, since I see so many people praise hinata for being kind and all that but even in fanfics her character is extremely underutilized

    Hinata can channel wind chakra into the Neko Te, and the moment she lands a hit on someone, the enemy won't have their chakra shut down, no, the enemy would have a finger-sized hole inside their body. Somehow, if they can survive, that enemy will never be able to use chakra again because Hinata literally punched a hole into their chakra network.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op7d
    Replied to God_Usopp_21

    Wth is that ugly expression on his face

    (You will lose your ability to reproduce offsprings. No menstrual cycle will occur in your body)
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op8d
    Replied to Shanaha

    I mean... I wouldn't call it plagiarism at least.

    When I woke up again, it was very disorienting. Instead of the ceiling of my apartment, I found myself surrounded by walls plastered with colorful posters of cartoons I hadn't seen in years. Nostalgia mingled with confusion, creating a peculiar brew of emotions. I felt smaller for some reason. "What happened?" I muttered, but the voice that came out was that of a child-sized.
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  • one_punch_op
    one_punch_op8d
    Replied to Venerable_Read3r

    Let's see, the secret behind magnet release was only known to the Kazekages and their successors so Orochimaru was unable to acquire it, same for particle style, but what we are currently discussing is a fan-made theory and it is not a confirmed theory by the author himself, with this fanfic being a fanfic, the topic we are discussing wouldn't matter since it's up to the author to make changes like that but if you do have any official sources like an interview or manga or any novels that state it's possible then I'll accept it as that if not then it's just a theory.

    Just when both Pakura and Rasa who had passed out in the sky were able to crash on the ground, a clone and Kazuki himself caught them both.
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