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Books that are written by me: 1-Accidentally Married a CEO 2-The President's daughter 3-The Billionaire’s Contracted Wife. 4-Torn Between Twin Brothers
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Hello anak, what do you think?
I understand, it was just a suggestion. if that’s the point you’re trying to convey to your readers, you need to elaborate a little and make it clear. So, she doesn’t look bad at the beginning. ❤️
Change the phrasing, take out stealing. It’s a turn off. it means she’s a thief. You ’re starting her character as a bad person. You could say, she lost her job because the company closed or something.
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