Lorenzo_Kim
Hello! In December this year, I will be writing my first ever Novel titled “Genesis of Water “ it will be centered around the water element and how powerful it is in the right hands. Thank you!
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Not gonna lie I love this novel. It’s not really slice of life but a character you can relate to for sure. Also he’s not overpowered and he’s very like how a person should be. The best thing is, if you like a farming sort of novel with a cautious and smart MCthis is soooo for you. I love farming and plants and alchemy related books and this one is definitely a treat of a book
Ofc idc about this novel. Jks pls both of u kiss already
your face is
All Becus u CANT get irina but nah supposedly has an elven wife but u cant
Soo gross
I actualy like the origin story. NOOO don’ remove it
She’s a little miser
CUUUUTEEE
This novel idk why it is popular. It’ literally just a novel describing sex and making women do shit with him every 5-10 chapters but hey? If you guys are all about h0rNy women getting together w MC then this novel would be 5stars for u. For me I want a story with proper depth so this is the lowest it can ever get for me
I believe my review is very fair. Having read a bit into the story by now, I am disappointed with the fight scenes and thought process of the characters The three biggest cons I have with this story is: 1. MC gets the things he needs too easily and too conveniently. It always happens before a big fight or a big transaction 2. The other characters are literally NPCS and I mean that in the most literal sense. They do not question their lord or anything. It just feels like a kingdom building story but with no soul. Just the MC is cognitive sorta 3. Information about things just drop out of nowhere - no leading context. And if you know a good story, you should know that it is better “to show and not tell”. I just feel like we’re constantly being introduced a new information but it just doesn’t feel very succinct - just so jarring and abrupt
I just find this comment si stupid
If you’re lookoing for a great novel, go read LORD OF THE MYSTERIES AND THEN THIS BOOK. BOTH ARE MASTER PIECES I TELL YOU MASTER PIECES OF NOVELS. THE BOOK PLOT CHARACTERS EVERYTHING IS SO INCREDIBLE. EVERY SIDE CHARACTER HAS AN ARC THAT LINKS WITH THE MAIN MC AND THEY R SO SO SO SO RESOURCEFUL IN THIS BARREN WORLD BUT ALSO SO MAGICAL