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Lorenzo_Kim

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Hello! In December this year, I will be writing my first ever Novel titled “Genesis of Water “ it will be centered around the water element and how powerful it is in the right hands. Thank you!

2021-02-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim2mth
    Commented

    Ofc idc about this novel. Jks pls both of u kiss already

    "No, not at all. It is a completely dry relationship where each of our goals are obvious."
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    The S Classes That I Raised ( The S Classes monsters that I raised)
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim6mth
    Replied to Cultivation81741

    your face is

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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim9mth
    Commented

    All Becus u CANT get irina but nah supposedly has an elven wife but u cant

    Josh chewed on his steak with a little more force than necessary as a dark expression appeared on his face. "Why do all of you have everything I want, yet I have nothing? All of you deserve to die!"
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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim9mth
    Commented

    All because you cant get irl a 🤣🤣

    Ch 802 And He Has an Adorable Daughter
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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim10mth
    Replied to Master_of_all_law

    Soo gross

    The shaking fat was unpleasant to the eye and made many new customers watch with fright. The enjoyment and happiness on their faces, though, seemed to have been amplified by their fat mugs. The live commercial of their faces was making the new ones wonder what food was making them act like this. They couldn't help ordering one despite the high price. Many new consumers had stayed because of them.
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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim10mth
    Commented

    I actualy like the origin story. NOOO don’ remove it

    Mag interrupted. "Stop. I don't want to hear it. I know these are all good stuff. You just want to sell them at a higher price. Just give me a number." He had to open his restaurant in a moment, and didn't have time to listen to the system's lengthy spiel.
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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim10mth
    Commented

    She’s a little miser

    Mag put the money in the drawer. Amy went back to counting the coins behind the counter after she said hi to the customers. She really loved counting coins.
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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim10mth
    Commented

    CUUUUTEEE

    "Then I'll start eating now." Amy happily took back her spoon, spooned another spoonful, and looked at the rice solemnly. "I'm sorry, rainbow, but I have to eat you now."
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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim10mth
    Posted

    This novel idk why it is popular. It’ literally just a novel describing sex and making women do shit with him every 5-10 chapters but hey? If you guys are all about h0rNy women getting together w MC then this novel would be 5stars for u. For me I want a story with proper depth so this is the lowest it can ever get for me

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    Village Head's Debauchery
    Fantasy · Royalpanda
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim10mth
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    I believe my review is very fair. Having read a bit into the story by now, I am disappointed with the fight scenes and thought process of the characters The three biggest cons I have with this story is: 1. MC gets the things he needs too easily and too conveniently. It always happens before a big fight or a big transaction 2. The other characters are literally NPCS and I mean that in the most literal sense. They do not question their lord or anything. It just feels like a kingdom building story but with no soul. Just the MC is cognitive sorta 3. Information about things just drop out of nowhere - no leading context. And if you know a good story, you should know that it is better “to show and not tell”. I just feel like we’re constantly being introduced a new information but it just doesn’t feel very succinct - just so jarring and abrupt

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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim10mth
    Replied to suzuki_satoru

    I just find this comment si stupid

    [Potential: White Silver-Tier Intermediate Grade]
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    Global Lord: 100% Drop Rate
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim11mth
    Replied to Abhishek_Basnet

    Love your enthusiasm but this should have a spoilers tag for new readers

    Ch 1 Foreigners
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim11mth
    Posted

    If you’re lookoing for a great novel, go read LORD OF THE MYSTERIES AND THEN THIS BOOK. BOTH ARE MASTER PIECES I TELL YOU MASTER PIECES OF NOVELS. THE BOOK PLOT CHARACTERS EVERYTHING IS SO INCREDIBLE. EVERY SIDE CHARACTER HAS AN ARC THAT LINKS WITH THE MAIN MC AND THEY R SO SO SO SO RESOURCEFUL IN THIS BARREN WORLD BUT ALSO SO MAGICAL

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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim11mth
    Commented

    AMAZKNG STORY WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW

    Ch 1 Foreigners
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim11mth
    Posted

    IM CRYING BECAUSE OF HOW FREAKING GOOD THIS NOVEL IS. GUYS ITS SO GOOD. ITS ACTUALLY INCREDIBLE HOW MINDBLOWING A WRITER HAS TO BE TO BE ABLE TO EXECUTE SUCH AN ORIGINAL AND POWERFUL CONCEPT. PLEASE EVERYONE PLS READ THIS AND THEN READ SEASON 2

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    Lord of Mysteries
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim11mth
    Posted

    The best novel to ever appear on Webnovel has now had its season 2. Everyone drop all other books you’re reading because the best novel is here and it’s here to slay

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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim1yr
    Posted

    Why are people sleeping on this novel right now huh? THERE NEEDS TO BE MOREEE HYPE! guys it is freaking LORD OF THE MYSTERY!! Best book EVER

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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim1yr
    Replied to Daoistwveffg

    He has not updated or uploaded a new chapter in a long time. No explanation fo the hiatus too. I really liked this Novel but as a reader I can’t hel but feel frustrated because I I looked forward to this novel the most when it was active

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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim1yr
    Replied to DJ87

    Slay

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    Reincarnation Of The Strongest Spirit Master
    Fantasy · ranmaro
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  • Lorenzo_Kim
    Lorenzo_Kim1yr
    Replied to Lorenzo_Kim

    Edit: guys the author abandoned this novel…

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